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The world is not such a shitty place now Merrick. And yes Theo. :) Thanks for this chapter!! Hopefully the next will be from Theo's pov.

Yay!! Update!! I'm so glad that Charles is excepting. I'm sad for the boys both of them have so many problems and not being able to see each other.

BUT WHAT HAPPENS D:

It's not dead, is it?

I hope you can update this soon!
It's really really good! :]

So I fully assume your long silence means that you've decided to write at least five chapters of ~~fluff~~ and it takes you a while to flesh it out, you know that, right?

Right?

oh god I'm so glad you're continuing this
i'm so attached to all of your characters, I reread your stories constantly
thank you so much for creating them, you're amazing!!! <3 <3 <3

Just want to let you know that I've read all of your stories these past few days and I love every single one of them! You're a fantastic writer and your humor is superb. I want to read more of your stories so I hope you update as often as possible. By the way, my favorite story of yours is Better Now and The Trouble with Thirteen. I'm kind of sad that Better Now is about to end but I want Merrick and Theo to achieve happily ever after thus I'm still thrilled that their story is about to reach Happy Ending. But I do hope you give us some snippets of how their future turned out. And I wish you'd continue with The Trouble with Thirteen because I really see it as one of your most captivating stories. I guess that's it. Thanks for being an awesome writer and sharing with us your wonderful stories.

Oh man, poor Merrick. I still don't get it why him and Theo have to be separated till after the trial. They're both on the same side. Theo was defending Merrick and himself. It just doesn't seem right.

I'm actually surprised Theo's parents took his relationship with Merrick so well. I thought since they were cousins, they would make a big deal over it.

Awesome chapter as usual orbiting! Now if only you'd update that terrific thirteen story.......:)

EEP! I was so happy to see this had updated and I was not disappointed! Thank you so much for continuing this story! I started tearing up when Theo told Charles he loved Merrick and when Merrick woke up without Theo. This is such a wonderful story and I can't wait to read the next installment!

Thank you so much! I was feeling down as I've got strep throat and this definatly brightened my day! I've been waiting for this story since I first found it. I loved this chapter and agree with Theo, Brett is a twisted F! Why would they even put Theo on trial for protecting Merrick? He better not be sent to prison, he did not use more force then neccesary and if he hadn't shot that twisted man, Merrick could've died!

I hope you up date soon :) I want to see what happenes in the trial. But the wait was worth it for this chapter. Poor Merrick having his jaw wired shut and a broken tail bone... christine's right it is just too much. I liked Charles reaction though. When he said 'I don't care' I was thinking ah that's so sweet. His father loves him.