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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How long are you going to hang us out on this cliff. Please update soon.
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry you've been having a hard time writing the last few chapters. They have been very enjoyable to read though! Can I rant for a moment about how awesome you are? You really have a talent for writing characters! All of your characters have very distinct personalities and I can't help but develop strong affections for them. Your stories really stir my emotions and I become addicted to checking for updates. You are my favorite author here and the only one I check on regularly. I know I totally sound like I'm just trying to kiss your ass, but seriously, I want you to know how appreciated you are. I want to encourage you to keep writing forever!
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Merrick. My heart is hurting for him. I hope that Theo can provide some sweet loving for him. I hope Merrick has learnt that he cannot trust Brent. i can't wait to read more
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was worth the wait! Stellar chapter!
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Agh! what a place to end it ^>^ no worries, its quite lovely and I just spent quite some time reading through all of 16 chapters and its way past my bed-time, lol, but just wanted to tell you that I love this story!! and I was halfway through before I realized that this is a story my friend told me to read quite some time ago, so I'm doubly glad I found it. You write Merrick and Theo wonderfully and I love them already ^.^ so thank you and huggles! Poor Merrick, its always hard to have to admit to the worst nature of someone u love or even just like - I hope that Theo comforts the hell out of him in the next chappie!
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As always, a veritable pleasure to read. Granted, I agree with your assessment of having picked a horrible place as an ending, but that you updated prevents me from criticizing you for that - instead, I anticipate fully the next installment.
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. They interact so well. Kind of an ebb and flow pattern. Thanks for the update.
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16
Short but sweet!
These two finally are getting somewhere.
So much unsaid between them before was hard to take.
Merrick really needed a a swift kick to get him to
see what a slime ball his ole pimp was. Nicely written!
Thanks for the intimate scene between the boys.
Now they're getting somewhere!!!!
Thanks,
R
Short but sweet!
These two finally are getting somewhere.
So much unsaid between them before was hard to take.
Merrick really needed a a swift kick to get him to
see what a slime ball his ole pimp was. Nicely written!
Thanks for the intimate scene between the boys.
Now they're getting somewhere!!!!
Thanks,
R
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww
i'm sad you stopped there, but yay! progress!
I've also decided that Theo is the best person ever
can't wait for more
-ariesgirl
i'm sad you stopped there, but yay! progress!
I've also decided that Theo is the best person ever
can't wait for more
-ariesgirl
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a nasty cliffie. that is so not nice of you.
i enjoyed this chapter so much and i fell of my chair in anticipation of some passionate tonsil inspection.
and you cut me off just when it got interesting.
so not fair.
after i waited so long for an update.
you realize that the only thing you can do to make it all up to me is to write a really long long chapter
full with passion and post it a.s.a.p ;)
i enjoyed this chapter so much and i fell of my chair in anticipation of some passionate tonsil inspection.
and you cut me off just when it got interesting.
so not fair.
after i waited so long for an update.
you realize that the only thing you can do to make it all up to me is to write a really long long chapter
full with passion and post it a.s.a.p ;)