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I will beg for an update!

i really liked the last couple of scenes in this chapter! great job! and i can't wait for more!
ASOTA

Oh, I can't believe I'm all caught up now and have no more to read. This is a fun story. Reminds of Fresh Prince of Belaire at first, you know with the bad kid from the city moving to the suburbs and all. Which is funny because then the Fresh Prince of Belaire comes up again the in Ninja Turtles conversation. Can't wait for updats.

ooooh i didn't notice you updated untill now
yay ^^
and yeah the perspectives switched back and forth faster than usual but it sorta made sense, like how it all happened sorta fast for Theo
so yeah, it was good, i liked it alot
also, i love how awkward Theo is and how amazing Merrick is being
*squeals*

-ariesgirl

How awkward, lol. And how real. I love it. Awkward is my new fascination, thanks for writing a scene like this.

Hey ! I really love this story because it is one of the few out there that doesn't portray gay men as limp-wristed fairies. I have read your other stories and likes them a lot. this one, though has got to be my favorite because I think this one is more gritty and realistic. I think it shows how you've developed as an author. I have been waiting for an update for years, it feesl like. Please do not abandon this fic! As far as suggestions go, I can only hope that once you do bring in sex inot this narrative there wouldn't be a clearly defined dominant/submissive partner. the relationship that Merrick had with Brent was about control and dominance through violence, emotional blackmailand other types of abuse. I think it would be a long-deserved and welcome change for Merrick to have a more reciprocated relatioship. And I really don't see a character like him being completely fulfilled being an uke. Theor is adorbale! He is such a mother hen and at the same time a guy.
Anyway, I hope your muse compells you to write soon!

Have you foresaken us?

Happy squee!

Where are you, what are you doing? Please come back to us!

I had this dream that you were going to update this story. Don't you want to make my dreams come true? I know you don't owe it to me, but I'll be very happy all the same.