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yeahz, well I love this story.
I wonder how will this whole Brent thing unfold...

"It's about frikin' time!" I love it! Great chapter. Merrick is really starting to open up and see love for what it is. Also I think he is the one kinda craving defination. I love that he thinks about Theo when he isn't around. The insecurities of new love is cute, and you tell/display it well. Thank you for the new chapter. I did the happy dance for sure!

Welcome back! I've missed you! I've been checking everyday for updates on this story and The Trouble With Thirteen. So glad your computer's fixed! Good luck w/school and work; I know it's tough.

I thought this chapter was really good. I was glad to see Merrick and Theo getting closer and Merrick's declaration (or astonishment!) of love was sweet; he was so like clueless!

Looking forward to the next chapter; I'll wait patiently by my computer! lol

Oh, and I'm slowly working my way thru all your amazing stories; you are such a talented, gifted, incredible writer! I love all your work! Are you majoring in writing or journalism in school? Maybe you should; you're awesome.

YAY!!! I'm doing the happy dance. I haven't even read the chapter yet, but I'm already doing the happy dance. THANKS!

EXCITING! I don't care how long it takes between updates. That last scene and especially those last few lines made the wait absolutely worth it! Now, if you have left us with some evil cliffhanger, I might be sighing forlornly at the computer screen, but now I get to excitedly giggle! :D

Can Brent just go away now? Like go and get killed or die or something? lol. I know it won't probably happen, but I'm just wishfully thinking here. Merrick and Theo are making strong progress and I just want to see that continue! Maybe I'm being too hopeful that all the drama is done? I still haven't forgotten that Merrick is supposed to meet that random John on Saturday. Who knows how that will turn out. Ahh, the suspense.

Either way, Merrick admited what he's feeling and that leaves me happy. Take care and hopefully the hecticness of school/work will begin to die down. Or we'll just have to wait for a while for the next update. Just remember to sleep properly, eat healthily, exercise, and have fun with your friends when you can! Sounds simple, right? I'm sure you can do it! :D

Ok so I don't think any of this is going to make a whole lot of sense, cuz my brain has officially shut down because ohmygod!!!
So. Small sentences. I love this story. Ridiculous amounts. And I've been checking for an update like everyday (multiple times) and it's sooo good. You're so good. So um yeah. Awesomeness in electronic form. I love that I can't predict what's going to happen at all, and yet everything that Merrick and Theo do seems so.. them. So, thank you. Really.

Did I fail to tell you I think your stories are great! Maybe I forgot to say I really like this story because I want to see Merrick get the happy ending he deserves. Maybe I didn't tell you I know only you can write this story, the way it deserves to be written, it is your special talent. Your writing that holds me and keeps me checking for updates even when I hold little hope that there will actually be one ther. Maybe I never told you I do a little happy dance when you update are. Maybe I just haven't told you how I really appreciate you taking hours out of your everyday life to write a chapter I sometimes forget to review, but I always love, and if it isn't a sad one it puts a smile on my face for days. Maybe I never told you I re-read storys while I wate for updates, even the sad chapters. Maybe I never told you when you disappear I wonder if you will ever post on here again or if you have found a different fourm and I'll never have closure on the unfinished stories.

Hummm. . . . MaybeI forgot to say all these things, or maybe I didn't tell you enough, but I'm telling you now.

Please Update soon.

I'm glad to see you're back and posting! I can't quite pinpoint what it is about your writing that catches me. Maybe it's your characters; they feel very real. Or maybe it's the sex, which, while hot, never feels like a replacement for plot, and rather moves the story forward. Either way, I look forward to reading more!

Canadians rock, for sure. When you mentioned Ice Caps, I had my suspisions, but after you used the word touque- well it doesn't get more Canadian then that, does it? lol Great story by the way. I think it is very well written, from a literary point of view, and also very enjoyable from an entertainment point of view. Very nice "real" factor. Like when someone called out to Andy and you wrote it as "AN!DY!" I could easily hear the way the guys in my highschool (back in the day lol) used to do that- turn their freinds names into two sylable chants. I don't think the wasy Mereick (wow, probably spelled that wrong, but who's going to notice?)acts with Brent is out of character at all. Ever heard the saying that someone brings out the worse in you? As an aspiring therapist, I have seen it many times; someone seems like a very tuff person because they are compensating, like in this case where there seems to be one person they just can't stand up too. Ya. I have a really bad habit of analyizing most stories. Anyway, really great work here, I can hardly wait for the next update.
From one canuck to another,
~Iconic.

Yes. Theo is defenitely my favorite of your characters. :D
My god, he's absolutely adorable.
I have to say, I'm all that broken up about the lack of plot in this chapter :P