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Hiii
So I just wanted to tell you that I am a really big fan of all of your stories. They're amazing! And I check obsessively to see if you've updated. But you haven't lately... I think this is the longest you've ever gone with out posting something. :/
I hope everything is ok in your life. And... I'm wondering how susceptible you are to bribes. :) I've actually wanted to draw fanart for your stories for a while now.
-ariesgirl

hey, I love this story, I hope we're getting an update soon. I want to find out what the boys are up to..........

We miss you! Hopefully with the holidays you will have some time so say hllo, even if you don't update we will al welcome an authors note. Tell us you are ok!

uh oh! looks like brent is going to get revenge! maybe all those martial arts lessons will come in handy? UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
ASOTA

OMG! This's a wonderful fic. I'm soooo hooked.
Theo's truely normal person and Merrick's so not. They're god-given pair. Just perfect together.
And I really hope that Brent'll get everything he deserves...with extra onion. What a prick!
Please update as soon as possible! I'm eagerly waiting...almost holding my breath. =))*huge hug*

Oh wow this is one heck of a cliff hanger. I'm looking forward to the confrontation. Not that I think it's going.to.be pretty, it is just very needed. Hopefully Theo will be able to use his skills to protect Merrick even if he says he doesn't want that.

Fuckin' AFF! I had this long assed review and now it's gone. Ok, Reader's Digest version! I'm so glad you updated this! I know it was updated a few days ago, but I was putting off reading it right away, b/c I was trying to prolong the inevitable end of the chapter! Did that make any sense? It's on of my favorite of your stories and definitely one of my favorite on AFF!

Is Merrick gonna get tested soon? I know the last chapter took place two days before this chapter, and this chapter ended on a Sat. night, so maybe Monday he'll get tested? I just want him to be ok!

I loved how he was so impatient in the beginning w/Theo: "I don't hear the garage door opening. I don't hear the engine starting." Hysterical! Almost as hysterical as Theo's dorkjamas! hahahah

Great chapter; I'm really worried about that fucktard Brent. How can Merrick protect and defend himself against him? Anyway, again, I am SO happy you updated this! I am slowly getting thru all your awesome stories. I'm on Doorways and Windows now! I just got so scared: I went into your profile and it said you don't have any stories published. But whew!!! Then I clicked on original stories and they all came up! OMG, if your stories were taken down like Happily Never After's, I would have had a FIT!!!!

I know I've said this before, but your writing is EXCELLENT, gripping, eloquent, prolific, I can't praise you enough! You are just one of the best writers I've read. EVER.

Ok, this review better go thru; if I have to rewrite it again, I'll scream!

Awww!!!! I love these two and I can't wait to see what they might have to deal with Brent and other issues.

Love, love, lovelovelovelovelove this story!! I'm so happy that you were able to update it. I think I've read all of your stories (or almost all of them) and like the rest, it didn't really grab my attention at first. Not saying that as a criticism, btw! But yeah, it didn't grab my attention the first couple of chapters but I KNOW you're an awesome writer so I kept reading and yup, I'm totally hooked.

Hope poor Merrick doesn't get the crap beaten out of him TOO badly! :(

Thanx for the update. Sorry to hear you've had computer problems. Very interested to see if Merrick goes along with his pimp/boyfriend's plans when the weekend rolls around. I was impressed when he turned down sex with Theo because they didn't have protection. Shows he has a little more self-control/morals than he originally thought. Also loved that he finally acknowledged his feelings for his quasi-cousin. Very nice. Look forward to more and thanx again.