rate_review Reviews

only contructive criticism i can think of at this moment is that i wish the chapters were longer. heheh you do tend to let the characters ramble a bit but i enjoy their rants and babbling so don't stop :-)

I love how your slowly turning merrick into an almost normal non-asshole. You've got your work cut out for you on in that one. the new characters sound intriguing, and it sounds like i would love to work for Max.

i love assertive Theo. He rocks

I love your writing style and im addicted to this story <3 keep it up.

WELCOME BACK!! I am a little obsessed with your writing and a little more than thrilled to see you posting again.

OMG, OMG, OMG, !!!!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You made my whole fucking YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Did you know you are one of my all time favorite authors on here?????????????????? Omg, I LOVE this story!!!!!!!! Shit, I'm so excited!!!!!! Thank you Thank you Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Unfortunately....I can't read it now, but as soon as I get back, I'm gonna devour the chapter!

youre back!!! thank you so muck for not giving up on this story! i almost didnt believe it when i saw it

I reread parts of this about once a month along with some of your other stories. I can understand you wanting to finish, but at the same time I hope you don't rush yourself. This story had a few interesting threads in it and I'd hate for you to pressure yourself or feel you had to rush through it just to complete it. It wouldn't bother me if it took you years to finish it. For me each chapter is sort of complete in itself. Sort of like snapshots that weave into a mural. I thought this chapter was particularly well done. The interaction between the three of them had a good mix of humor and gravity and I liked seeing that Merrick and his uncle have something in common an seeing part of both of their emotions (directly and indirectly) was enlightening. So, of course do whatever you feel is best with your stories, but I appreciate whatever comes out when it comes out.

LOVE!!!! this story! Great ch, can't wait for the next!

Lol, you definitely haven't lost your touch! I thought it was a wonderful chapter and glad Christine now knows about Theo/Merrick.