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for Better Now

by orbitingjupiter

person Rosei
schedule July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Best of luck to you!
You've been a great author here on AFF over the years!!!!
Thank you and I look forward to seeing your published works!!!!
person fudge
schedule June 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story, hoping for a sequel or at least an epilogue???
schedule May 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You know, I wonder if Charles isn't beating himself up now about leaving his brother to his own devices. Seems to me that he would. I mean he had good reason for doing so, but I know I'd be wondering over and over if I could have saved my nephew from those predators if I'd stuck around, and yeah I just wanted to protect my new family, but maybe Merrick's fate turned out worse than theirs would have been. Like, Charles has to justify that to himself all over again. Maybe even find absolution from Merrick.

I don't remember, does Merrick remember Charles from when he was a kid? If Charles cut off contact eleven years ago he probably does, right?
schedule May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg you updated
and yeah you updated months ago but then I had this crazy semester and I forgot I even write, and I haven't updated since August, myself, and I don't remember the last time I was on AFF, even
but you updated and it's lovely, right down to Merrick's awkward spelling. Now do it againnnnnnnnnnn <3 <3 <3
person Hopesouth
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Such a great story! Thanks for updating!!
schedule November 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh gawd, this story is so painfully good. I just want more. Oh please please more. I'm so glad Brent is dead. Now I just want Theo and Merrick to be together and happy. Charles has turned out to be so much nicer than expected! It's great. I look forward to reading more.
schedule November 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, Orbiting, you got me all choked up!

What a great chapter - well worth the wait! Thank God Merrick's gonna be ok, physically at least.

The letters were so sweet and Charles is being wonderful to Merrick.

Merrick was funny with Amy - poor thing, her second day and she has to interview Merrick. lol

Can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe it'll come soon, yeah? :)
schedule November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Orbiting! Orbiting! Orbiting! I did a little (ok, big), happy dance orbiting around my house when I saw this posted!!!!! I thought you totally abandoned it! I thought you abandoned AFF!!!! I'm so glad I was wrong!!!

Unfortunately I can't read it now, but I'm hoping to devour the chapter later tonight. :)

Thank you, thank you, thank you, Orbiting!! You just made my whole fucking year! =)
person addiena_saffir
schedule November 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see an update. I hope everything works out for the boys and that Merrick goes to therapy and gets himself better.
person BlueRiver
schedule October 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you have updated this story! I hope that means you will also update your other stories!