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for Granola Bar

by Lunarwench

person sarana
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! THERE IS PART 2!!! I am so happy right now! This is like one of my favourite stories I must have read it like a bajillion times! SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!!! HOW ARE YOU SO AWESOME?!!! *_* I am ded of the awesome... I just love the whole 'pft humans are so silly' thing at the end! Ahahahahaha, and the whole barking when he came thing! Spirit is just too adorable for words! I think my brain melted from the cute overload when he kneaded his tail.

Also, I signed up on Y gallery, but it doesn't like my com or something because I log in fine but I can't access anything... So I'll just read on here. ^_^
person sarana
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So sweeeet!!! Poor Spirit must be dying of embarrassment though...
person MiraMira
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
~le gasp~ noo~ please continue this *begs pittifully* It sounds like the begining of an adorable story...
person kaze
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cute~<3
person myladymystere
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love your writing. You make your characters very real and in this story Spirit was adorable !!! There are not many writers I truly hunt for, but now I will with you. I hope you never lose your insperation.
person DJfrdrck
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE LOVE LOVE
person Lycan
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story as usual, read some of your stuff and you really have a gift for righting.

I would really like to see this story continued.
person Anonymous
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohmygawd. this is the cutest thing i have read in ages. loved it, loved it, loved it.
keep up the good work on your writing!
person Kip
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! So cute!!! More? Pretty please??? 'Purr
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very, very cute. x3 I'm not usually one for characters that are that submissive, but it was a cute story nonetheless... good set-up, great ending. Entirely enjoyable!