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for Granola Bar

by Lunarwench

schedule April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story. Great love scenes. Much love ~bye bye~
person Juana13
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh I loved this story!!!!!!!!!! So cute!!!!
person Doppelganger
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Gosh Spirit is so adorable! And Ty is so funny and sweet! Lols! I don't blame him for wanting to cuddle the cute little fox!
person kylee
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I did not leave a review the first time I read this story. I came back to refresh my memory. I love every part of it. It is the cutest story ever. I love Ty and Spirit. They are a perfect and sexy match. I like how careful Ty was with Spirit and how Spirit's mom came to check Ty out. I am going to jump into Drabbles. Thanks for continuing the story.
person Anon
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow... this was really good.. really really good..
I don't really know what to say, except that I'd love to see another chapter for this,
or another fanfic in the same universe. Everything was just.. perfect. Yes, thats the best way to desccribe it.
I think Im off to read it again now:)
person Anon
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgott to leave my e-mail incase you wanted to respond to the review, it was the one that said that the fic was perfect...

A thing that I noticed once I read it again was that Spirits mother accepted Ty when he submitted to her, but wouldnt she want him to be strong so that he could protect Spirit and future cubs, maybe, if thats were this fic was going, if it comes future chapters that is?
I was just wondering, since I dont really understood that..

Anyway, I love this fic and Id love to see more of it:)

E-mail:

i_was_not_here_@hotmail.com
person wynja
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! I've almost forgotten about this story, but the update was GREAT! So sweet! ANd smexy... ;o) I want more, will begging do it?
person COCO
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The ending made me giggle! This is such a beautiful story. I love it. Thanks so much! :3
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww i wanna cuddle spirit *_*
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my how cute!! I absolutely love cute stories the most. Thank you for adding another chapter to this. Can we hope for more?