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by CaburyQueen

person Linece
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice. :)
It's fun to see how much they can't understand the other. I mean, she hates him so she doesn't wanna serves him. He gets angry, punishes her and she hates him a lot more. :D
The sex scenes are hot, I love them. :) And I'm curious, I wanna know which Marcus is the real one. The one who tries to be gentle or the cruel one.

Can't wait for the next update!
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol... For some reason, this chapter just made me smile and laugh which I needed... But, poor Rene she has her hands full with Marcus..
person Ahhh!
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you havent updated this in forever! loved it. so good. update soon.
person Noelle
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please review!!!! i'm loving this so far.
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story
person ree
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so far, so good! please update soon!
person Kay
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Update soon please! Just one question: Will Marcus's age be revealed later or was it already? Sorry to ask if you revealed it already. ^^
person LOVELUST
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Incredible. I love this story and great update. Please update soon. Quail is actually really good. That I would have eaten.
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Intresting.. I like Marcus.. lol
person Cindy
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, and interesting. I hope you continue the story, I look froward to it