rate_review Reviews

I love it, I love the way you build up the tension its great.
I also love that you have Elijah in a confusing position, like he's not sure whether he's attracted
to the devil thing or whether he's terrified by it.

I can't wait for the next update, especially cause i'll have to wait two weeks for it! How am i going to manage the wait?

Love Aduial

Ohhhhhh GOOOOOD!!!! I want MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEEE!!!! >________< Pretty plz!? ;;

I'm Luving ur story so far! I just can't wait to read more! XD

That demon looks REALLY HOT! I can't wait to see more of those two!

Thank you sooooooooo much for the fantastic story! *hugs X3*

What?! Only one chapter?! How can you and a cliffhanger at that. This is sooo good. I really love all the discription you've put in it, seem so real and not at all weird. OMG I can't believe there is only one chapter, how mean is that? you better write more, or...or...or I can't think of what will happen. Hmm...well I want more because its great and I love it and I'm very excited here can you tell.

LOVE IT!

Aduial

Jen Jen wants more....more more more.....nam nam nam
I've had too much sugar :S

Interesting start. Keep writing.

KD