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for The Ultimate Mystery

by Reike

person Kasdeya
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O Damn good story! u just GOT to continue this!! It gotz me completely hooked
person Saminada
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh gowd! I wonder what's Elijah's mystery?? It looks awful... sniff

This story really is great! I LOOOOOOOOOVE it! :DD

I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for the story! *huggles*
person JAD
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! and ooooooooooooooooooo, dum dum dummmmmmmm. Very interesting as always x
I promise I'll write more of mine soon!
person Jetfire
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way there's interaction between Elijah and Ira and not just....oh lets have sex. This story has really got depth and damn your making me want more. MORE I tell you. I swear its like you know watching part one of lord of the rings and knowing that you wont get the next part until a year later (obviously when they were just in the cinema). Why, why must you torture me so?

Sometimes it feels like its actually as if your Elijah, you def feel him more then your feel Ira, which is really good. I love being able to feel a character. Also your writing style is amazing and obviously your spelling and grammar lovely, seeing as its quite rare here. What was that about opening a spelling and grammar school for people on aff? ENGLISH RULES! Now, I can't wait to read more from you, anything will do. *nudge* ANYTHING
person Poppy
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! This's the first time I review for this story. I would like to tell that I'm falling in love with Elijah and Mr.Satan(><) Hope Lijah can servive from become the special meal...Waiting for next chapter by willingly heart ^^V
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More more more. Let me guess his parent were hiding him.
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! Hope you continue, it's really interesting and original
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohmigod... This story is so worthy of my drool! =] Is it to early to say I loveeee you for writing this story?! Because I do! Lol. This story is very interesting; I can't wait to learm more about Ira and Elijah. XD Keep up the awesome job!!!!
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, you have that poor human boy at your mercy. Do your best overlord laugh and continue!

KD
person JAD
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I command you to write more ;-)