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Hah! You took my golden shower virginity and I didn't even see it coming. That's pretty slick. Yes, I know I should read codes, but then where is the fun and surprise. I thought this was a fun and dirty one shot. Yay you.

Hummmm...I can honestly say that I have never read anything quite like that. Generally when anything involving urine comes into play it's because I'm reading some sort of werewolf fic. I won't lie and say that I'm interested in that kind of thing, because to be honest I cringed through most of this, but I will tell you that your characterization and acknowledgement of S&M considerations was beautiful. Also, I applaud you for having the balls to write this and post it. Most people would be much to worried about someone finding out they did such a thing.

And I also have to tell you that all of your stories are coming out very violently! I was tied to a chair and made to read or be forced to watch badly acted out mansex between two fangirls. *shudders*

Taku

After having read your story and then the reviews, I had to review. Sweat smell is such a turn on! Love it! Golden showers, ehh no turn. However, your story was very well written, super hot, and the pacing worked. I do not know why your other reviewers were so mean to you! Please write more. Totally enjoyed!

well...i definitely like your other stories more...probably because i'm not a golden shower fan. i was uncomfortable during that part... i also like your other stories more because they have a plot. i know that you had a PWP in the warnings, but i want to be able to review all your stories because i love you. i probably don't read PWPs that often b/c even though i may sound like it at times, i'm not big on sex. just so you know.
ASOTA

That was sick... in a fantastic way. GOOD WRITING. Genius. Not usually one for piss-play, you managed to make it hot. Good job. I'd love to talk to you about writing sometime, feel free to email me at ohnojulian@gmail.com if you feel like it. I'd love to hear more about your writing and stuff.

Ho dear! where do I began, I like yaoi and some male slash then I began tto read even if the particular theme is not one of my turn ons aand in fact I found it a bit well... "eww" I think I can understand the chimical factors aabout it any way no mather this circunstances I found that u writte a bout somenthing that can be so gross with a lot of talent I trully didn't like it so much because of the theme but I liked a lot how u wroted I'm sure any other writer had wrote it I couldn't being able to go trough all of it I think is a very good job! and I think I would read some of your others works.

This was really.... gross, actually. Even if you do have a theory about how sweat is sexy (it is) you put far too much emphasis on the sweat thing and smelling each-others arm-pits. Everyone knows that sweat contains pheromones that are attractive to the opposite sex and the same sex if you have the right sexual orientation, it's all in the brain-chemistry (or at least anyone that reads science magazines knows these things) but you over-emphasize this in a creepy way. Like they have some kind of sweat-fetish. It made it really obvious to me that you'd never had sex before. >.< When people are gross and sweaty because it's hot out or they just exercized it's gross, not sexy. But the sweat-smell that builds up over the day in someone's underwear (yes, that's what that smell is) is sexy. Okay? Okay. Now I'm going to go read some real porn and try to purge this from my mind.

i didn't realize I have read everything you ever posted on here. I found this one to be interesting. It was definitely dirty like promised. It is probably the first piece on here that I would say is truly adult in that it isn't the run of the mill type thing. I think you definitely achieved your goal. Good Job.

Now THAT's a dirty lay =p
Really good. Really different. I like.

That was. . . interesting. I can't say I've ever been attracted to that sort of thing, but you made it work. It was still a little odd, though. . . but if it wasn't odd then it wouldn't be a fetish, would it? But like I said, you made it work.