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for What a Pain

by Reike

person alexa87
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story it's just so funny.
And thanks for the fast updates. ;)
person Jetfire
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*woop!* That was official great. I love the mind your manners bit. Guess Awan gets turned on by denial...hmm now that makes for good situations.

Photocopying his backside, saw that coming but was still hilarious, especially since his boss will probably keep it to wank over. I know the boys did that in senior school...sometimes...photocopying their butts. Tihihihi.

Well I love this, definitely will keep on reading, want more. Will update soon. Um...what else oh yeah I managed to stay sat on my chair today, still laughed hard, just the right thing after a stressful day at work. *happy sigh*

Aduial
person Aleks
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My first thought: there will be a nice copy of ass :)
....and I was right....
I hope we will learn more about his boss....and what Awan is thinking....if he is thinking...... :)
person Zelasii
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! I'm sorry for not reviewing the last two chapters, I didn't even know there were two more T____T
Thanks for the link on the Cake or Death thing. I watched it, and now I get it. Haha xD
Sorry, I live in Canada if that helps to explain anything.
Oh! I'm guessing PMT is the male version of PMS? Or another British joke? GAH! I feel so out of place when many of the authors here are from/live in Europe xD
person Aleks
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
to say the truth: I think his boss is more interesting :)
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He just put it out there. "We fucked."

I did some talking to the monitor on that one.

A man did that to me, he would so be getting Ex-Lax in his coffee.

You're working fast. I think it helps to keep a schedule. Just like with anything else, it will become habit.

Good work!

KD
person Jetfire
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH I just had to check out what you'd written after you so nicely and lovely reviewed my story and I nearly laughed myself to death honestly, it is totally hilarious. I love Jose, and I really admire you for being able to right in first person perspective, it makes it all the more funny. And his annoying boss, class...grubby handed children, tell me about it i work with htem and the annoying boss sounds just like one of the parents I have to work with.

Well anyway I nearly fell off my chair laughing, actually I did fall off my chair laughing, because it decided to give way backwards...lol. You need to keep this up. I do want to know what is going to happen to Tony and Andy. OH the joys of this story, i can't believe I haven't read it before this. Tis bril *bows*

Hugs Aduial
person Kryst Sutures
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going... *pervy* I kind of want to see Mr. Jared and Jose do the horizontal tango...Why? I really don't know. It's been subtly nagging me since I started reading from the beginning and now I'm all for it.

Maybe it'd get Awan jealous. Although I'm not saying I want Jose to be the office whore... But it's hot. Sue me! Keep the updates coming hehe
person JAD
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jennimer? Ok, I can deal with that!

Mmmmm cuteness! Chapter cuteness!

xoxo
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He's really in a mess, here. Curious to see if/how you fish him out of the hot water.

Ah, man love.