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I think that chapter went down well.....

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*falls off cliffhanger*

Mr. Jared was going to fire him?! After oogling his ass? What a pig! And I don't think Awan is lying. Must learn more! Also, he has a boyfriend? Oh boy.

That was a very bad/weird moment to stop...........
And Awan is a cheater.... I don´t like cheaters, an open realationship or not, both is not possible....so now there is only one solution: his boss (you already know I like that idea.....some jealousy, a fight......etc.)

Waiting :)

oh and I was right : Awan is not thinking, he just wanted sex...

See i was just waiting for you to update, seeing as I updated TWICE last week. Go me. Anyway back to the actual fact of your review going on here;

How awful is awan? he needs a good butt kicking. OOOOH how i hate people who cheat on their boyfriends or girldriends they'Re the most evil bastardes stupid fucking (excuse the word) assholes that work this planet. Jose so needs to get his own back and he seriously doesn't need to mope around after him anymore. What he needs is a proper solid boyfriend. OOOH I could rant all day. Awful I tell you awful nasty bastard of a man. GGrrrr.

Ok sorry I'll stop ranting but the story is good but Awan makes me soooo angry, how about locking him and COrtax togehter? they could Shag up. *nudge nudge* more please.

Aduial

This just keeps getting more involved. Interesting.

KD

Oh god, I just about ruptured my liver laughing. Spewed water all over my keyboard, I did! I needed a laugh and that did it! Hahaha! Poor Jose! Such fun stuff happens to him. As for Awan, he's confusing. But that sexual tension was something else so I guess it was bound to happen.

Great chapter as always hunni!!!

Gaaaawd. You just had me drooling, then, suckus interuptous. No fair! He should have at least gotten to shoot, and I'm sure Jose agrees!

I should hang onto my next chapter another day just for that! lol

KD

Hehehe....that was adorable