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for What a Pain

by Reike

person queen of the cucumbers
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW IT! Awon (did I spell this right) was lying!!! I really, really, REALLY don't like him. I like Mr. Jarad a lot better. And Tony's boy friend....he's so sweet. :3 He reminds me of a friend of mine. Soooooo.....is he going to confront Awon about this? or is there another plot twist to this that we don't know about? Are you going to update soon? I hope so; I'm really enjoying this fic...
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Went to the last chapter only to realize I was missing THREE updates...damn girl your good...me who is still writing chapter 5 of mine (silly me wanting to make it like 5k words)

Wonderful update
person Kryst Sutures
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens. So... Awan lied? What an asshole.
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no.

Reading on.

KD
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good grief. Well, now what?

This poor guy.

KD
person JAD
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Andy's so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!
I want one.
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry but I would go up to my boss and ask if it was true.
person Jetfire
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*applauds* Yeah I'm so happy you updated. Jose should just set Tony on the guy, get him to bite his ankles or something. I love tony and andy, i hope we get more of them, sorry not watching spelling and capital letters in the review, bad me. I love the way you keep on dropping in little details, like that he has a completely normal life, and your not forcing him to do anything.

I am addicted to this story, the worst is going to be two weeks on holiday with no internet and no chance to read this or review. I'll be home next week and then I'll be off so..*nudge nudge* update there please so I at least have something to take on holiday with me. And my first language is german, but I went to school in england for years...still english isn't my mother tongue.

Aduial
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic, although I think that you could flesh out some of the characters a bit more. So far, I'm only seeing one side of about 5 people, and I'd love to learn more about them. Overall, kudos to you.
person TheSiner
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! So cuuute!