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for What a Pain

by Reike

person eroburn
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
somehow... i feel really bad for cody
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That....was....so....MEAN!!

Giggles!
person MysticMoon
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!
priceless! I loved it!
The characters are awesome and well developed.
The storyline is really really original and it's really funny!
great job, i can't wait to see whats going to happen next
person tf
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I saw this on someone's rec list and I'm glad I gave it a try; great fic-I'm enjoying it so far though I'm not sure if I want Jose ending up with any of the current possibilities; thanks for the update!
person IRINUTZA
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe it gets more and more interesting :)
Longer updates would be welcomed though.

very nice story and characters, i'll be waiting for the updates :)
person JAD
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha! That showed you, Awan with your evilness!!
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good now can we see what his reaction is going to be to the boyfriend? And the liar?
person Jetfire
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooh! Some one needs a smack I feel. What a surprise, wow, you are brilliant *hands out prize*. You might want to use longer sentences sometimes though...if I may give that as a piece of advice, you seem to enjoy using short sentences. Anyway whatever you do it is brilliant. And you're german isn't awful, but I prefer to stick to english because honestly my german has taken quite a blip because I spend so much time in england.

When do I get more Tony and Andy? WHEN??? We need some smexing here! NEED IT IT TELL YOU *cue demonic eyebrows* Anyway my lovely keep up the good work...lol lovely...now where did I get that from.

WOHOOHOO HUGS Aduial
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Relieved about his job security. Attracted to the boss? Uh-oh.

Hey, I can worry about your characters. It's my job to torture mine. ;)

KD
person Suzie
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh ohh, I knew there was a reason the boss was such a part of the story. I hope this turns into what it seems like it might!

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