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muah thankyou.
i have the next two chapters of The Monster Under My Bed written
unfortunately they are on the computer at my work.
i lost my only floppy. gotta get some more but need cash for that.
so lol. u might three updates in one day.
I Broke Down is done at 125,000 words. huge story.
i stopped updating it because my comp got hit by lightning.
but i didnt stop writing it.
so.. as soon as its beta'd... a week or two?
i will start posting it.
thankyou btw.
i always like to hear when someone reads my stories.
i have been a fan of yours for a while, but
i more or less forgot to review.
i thought i had...opps.
lol.
-ero

cody or his boss. not sure which...
but please be anyone but dude he works with

Aw poor Cody! They should both beat the crap out of Awan. Or something.

What I can't wait to see is how Awan is going to get back at Jose for this. Who would've thought a one night stand could lead to all this? This story is so awesome. I never thought it would've been like this.

hahah Poor Cody, but Awan totally deserved to be ratted out. I wonder how this will affect their already tense work partnership *snicker*. So is there gonna be something going on with Jose and the boss man? maybe?

I understand and I'm happy you don't. You have to build up to it but that doesn't affect the I want it now felling.

:3 He should so go to his boss with this....

HA! AWAN! SERVES YOU RIGHT! TAKE THAT!!! :P I hate that guy. Jose sure showed him!!!! WAY TO GO! He needs to find someone to help him get over this....

D'aw!!! :B Tony's in love....*huggles them both* So cuuuuute! ok, no more sugar for me.

Saw a few punctuation problems (I'm a punctuation whore, sorry ^^;)a couple of type-os and some grammar mistakes, but nothing that really subtracted from the story. Can't wait for the next chapter. I wanna know what happens next! :D

I think Jose needs to do some smacking. Good work.

BTW, you're on my rec list. Have been for a while.

KD

An update! YAY! This is one story I always look forward to catching up on. I missed it for a while. Go Jose! You sure showed that asshole. Although now I think the shit is about to hit the fan. And I can't wait to see how that goes down!

I can't help but feel sorry for Cody, though.

As for Awan...IN YOUR FACE, BITCH! *high fives Jose*

Whoa! Love how Jose gave it to Awan!

I hope that at the moment I'm not the only one sorta wanting Jose to get together with his boss ...Awan's being a right dickhead...argh!