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I got dibs on the machete!

Well Kale's on my good side except for that whole are you a whore Jose? thing ;) while Awan's on my sh*t list; thanks for the update!

*flails* :O Poor Cody!!! I want to give him a big hug! At least Jose tried to make it up to him some how....Grrr.....Awan should die in some kind of horrible car accident or something....At least Mr. Jared didn't buy the rumors to much....and, you know, at least he asked first, acted later....and what a great act it was....*jumps up and down in happiness* Wh00t for the boss! But I'm willing to bet Awan isn't finished, right? He's going to be so pissed when he finds out that Jose didn't get fired...and if he finds out about what just happened....*squirms eagerly* Oh, I can't wait to see what happens next :3

*calmly takes jaw off floor*

Holy. Shit. THAT WAS HOT! I'm amazed at how easy Jose is. Such a slut. *slaps him on the wrist* But wow. I forgive his behaviour. It's too sexy for me to be upset. I wonder how Awan's going to respond to this. I mean, Jose was in there pretty long...

And really... Awan is such a dick. What a horrible rumour. I'm so hooked on this. Like even more hooked on this than I was on phonics! And I went to rehab for that.

I'm a little confused. I thought this story was about Awan and Jose? Now I'm confused on where this story is heading. BUT I do like this story. Its interesting and catchy. Please continue and update soon.

I want an Andy.....*pout*

Thanks for this update! Loved it! Jose is cosying up to Cody now? Wow! I was rooting for Jose and his boss... :-)

About the wine: When Andy asked "what type?", I thought maybe you'd say red/white (or be more specific about grape: e.g. merlot, chardonney) - giving the brand may not be a real indication of how well it would go with the food. Only because they chilled it, by inference, we were able to guess it was a white. I felt Andy would be a sincere, nice guy and be real about whether the wine would work with whatever he was cooking up

Awan's an ass. I no like him.

Good story, only complaint is that its not longer.

Oh no plenty if detail and well written I'm just impatient.

Okay, patience isn't a strong suit for me. Sling some smut, girl!

KD