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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! I got my shower scene wohoo....at last someone wrote a sexy shower scene. *hugs back*.
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I saw you had posted a new chapter and nearly dislocated my clicker finger! Woot! Lovely.
KD
KD
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sitting onthe middle of class oh look there's an update. Reading okay in retro spect I should have waited untill I got home. So worth it if I was caught though. 5 stars
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. I must say I'm quite liking this action. I never thought I'd say this but... I prefer Kale to Awan! Even if he is a bit possessive and a bit strange. Hot, hot stuff!
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope Kale doesn't hurt Jose, I really like him!~ Can't wait till the next chapter =D
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story 'What a Pain' for the first time in one sitting because I couldn't wait to see what was going to happen next. I think you're a great writer and I hope you continue to write this story, especially now that Mr. Jared has made his move on Jose. I can't wait to read what happens next. Hopefully Awan gets what is coming to him in a big way.
~Elle
~Elle
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chap 10
Good ole Tony. I wish I had a friend who could get this worked up over my life. He's always listening and caring. Such a good guy! Jose is lucky...no, Andy is lucky to have him. And yeah, Jose is right. Awan really needs to chill. He's gonna die young if he gets so stressed and he's too handsome to die.
Chap 11
I'm glad Jose showed Awan and hmm, I like his talk afterwards with Mr. Jared. Hell no its not anger, JOSE! And yes, I think I would like him with Mr. Jared. He's not as bad as he seemed earlier...just a bit arrogant, but hey, he's hot enough to be. But when he's being honest, he's something else. Give in, Jose...he did smell good and he is fine!
Good ole Tony. I wish I had a friend who could get this worked up over my life. He's always listening and caring. Such a good guy! Jose is lucky...no, Andy is lucky to have him. And yeah, Jose is right. Awan really needs to chill. He's gonna die young if he gets so stressed and he's too handsome to die.
Chap 11
I'm glad Jose showed Awan and hmm, I like his talk afterwards with Mr. Jared. Hell no its not anger, JOSE! And yes, I think I would like him with Mr. Jared. He's not as bad as he seemed earlier...just a bit arrogant, but hey, he's hot enough to be. But when he's being honest, he's something else. Give in, Jose...he did smell good and he is fine!
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chap 12
Tony and Andy have their own story? Huh, must check that out, definitely! Omg...I can't believe Jose just came out and said that to Cody. Lol. I feel bad for Cody but he must know that Awan is a cheating motha...yeah. He'll be fine...he can just take Mr. Jared, anyway. He's just as good, if not better.
Chap 13
I've noticed i'm not the only one who spells Whoa...woah...I mean, honestly, it sounds more like a woah. But whatever--stupid English. Andy is a cutie and I love his interaction with TOny. They seem like a couple who could never fight. Tony is so laid back and Andy is too sweet. I love them! They don't have Jose's sass and Mr. Jared's higher than thou attitude, but they're cute nonetheless. It sucks having no one and having someone as perfect as them rubbing it in your face, but they're just too great for each other to make it annoying. My heart goes out to Cody, he looked like a mess and not a aggressive one, ready to attack Jose, but just pitiful. It makes it even worse. And situations like those are hard to do--I just stand there as well. I hope he finds someone better. You're good so if that someone ends up being Jose, I probably will like it but still gunning for Mr. Jared.
Tony and Andy have their own story? Huh, must check that out, definitely! Omg...I can't believe Jose just came out and said that to Cody. Lol. I feel bad for Cody but he must know that Awan is a cheating motha...yeah. He'll be fine...he can just take Mr. Jared, anyway. He's just as good, if not better.
Chap 13
I've noticed i'm not the only one who spells Whoa...woah...I mean, honestly, it sounds more like a woah. But whatever--stupid English. Andy is a cutie and I love his interaction with TOny. They seem like a couple who could never fight. Tony is so laid back and Andy is too sweet. I love them! They don't have Jose's sass and Mr. Jared's higher than thou attitude, but they're cute nonetheless. It sucks having no one and having someone as perfect as them rubbing it in your face, but they're just too great for each other to make it annoying. My heart goes out to Cody, he looked like a mess and not a aggressive one, ready to attack Jose, but just pitiful. It makes it even worse. And situations like those are hard to do--I just stand there as well. I hope he finds someone better. You're good so if that someone ends up being Jose, I probably will like it but still gunning for Mr. Jared.
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chap 14
Whew...sort of relieved that Cody isn't for Jose. Hope he gets someone better, poor thing. Awan is not worth his time. I mean, How low does Awan get? Making him out to seem like a whore? Geez! But it was worth him getting into Mr. Jared's office and having that lovely scene go down...god....Mr. Jared is so dreamy! Crazy how the perception of him quickly changed into something good and Awan, supposed to be the hot, dreamy one, turns out to really be the asshole. I also like how Mr. Jared established it wasn't a one time thing before he ravished him into cloud nine. It makes the situation SO MUCH different than the one with Awan. I love this chapter so much! WOOT! Things are going right, finally!
This was my all time favorite line: “José, I’m about to screw you senseless. Call me Kale.”
LOL.
Whew...sort of relieved that Cody isn't for Jose. Hope he gets someone better, poor thing. Awan is not worth his time. I mean, How low does Awan get? Making him out to seem like a whore? Geez! But it was worth him getting into Mr. Jared's office and having that lovely scene go down...god....Mr. Jared is so dreamy! Crazy how the perception of him quickly changed into something good and Awan, supposed to be the hot, dreamy one, turns out to really be the asshole. I also like how Mr. Jared established it wasn't a one time thing before he ravished him into cloud nine. It makes the situation SO MUCH different than the one with Awan. I love this chapter so much! WOOT! Things are going right, finally!
This was my all time favorite line: “José, I’m about to screw you senseless. Call me Kale.”
LOL.
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I missed three chapters!!! THREE CHAPTERS! Oh wow that was amazing, and unexpected. Poor Cody, how about castrating Awan? What a complete and utter arse! You are brilliant. Brilliant I tell you. Wonderful, brilliant and amazing. I love Tony and Andy. I want a Tony....hmm how to aply for one.
Anyway what is this with Mr. Jared? Having it off with his boss really! Jose is slighlty whorish isn't he? Naughty boy.
HUGS ADUIAL
Anyway what is this with Mr. Jared? Having it off with his boss really! Jose is slighlty whorish isn't he? Naughty boy.
HUGS ADUIAL