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Nice sex scene. Have to keep up my intake ration for all the smut I pour out. ;)

KD

Okay now I know what he looks like. My memory is very horrible. The little details in this chapter helped, too.

Um...so... Awan is hot as hell. XD. That was a hot sex scene. If I didn't like this story before, I love it now. I'm a pervert, sue me. I can't help but wonder how this is all going to shape up when they find out they have to work together... Perhaps they won't get along so well with their clothes on. But they've certainly got some chemistry with those damn clothes off!

Oh and they used condoms. That's awesome XD. So many stories leave out that important little latex thing.

What a switch! Me reading you.

You write fiction like you 'talk', which tickles me because it is so familiar. Yet, this is the first of your creative copy I have read.

Brava!

No, Jose, you cannot resist. Dooo it! I like how he doesn't realise this is the guy he's supposed to be working with. Oh well, he's clubbing. Not very notorious for a place where good choices and levelheaded thinking take place.

I'm kind of waiting for someone to say "No way Jose"... And then for Jose to smack them stupid. I kind of have no idea what Jose looks like, though... Aside from being 5'7" XD

I like it so far!

What an awesome start. I'm hooked on this already. So many sexy characters and I like Jose's perspective, he's quite hilarious!

Aw you sweetie with your out-of-practice-ness...but we'll get you going again :-)