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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting stuff. Wasn't expecting Tony to be a rich guy. Jose's surrounded by rich people, isn't he? XD. Can't wait to see more Jose and Awan interaction. Something tells me those two are so not getting together any time soon... Although the sexual tension's fun. Well, at least I sense it with Jose. Not sure if Awan's feeling anything. Hot bastard.
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"thank you for flying Church of England, cake or death?" "well i'll have the chicken then!"
that's all. good story. looking forward to more...
that's all. good story. looking forward to more...
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, that section works better now we touched it up :) Loving it as always!
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far..Jose's personality is almost like Hiroki from Junjou Romantica - which is not a bad thing. I find him completely adorable in his neurotic-ness. Looking forward to the next chapter
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Hmmm. Death. I mean cake!"
"You said 'death'."
"I meant cake."
"Ohhh, all right. Cake."
I love that man. One of my personal favs. "Do you have a flag?" And, "I'm covered in bees!"
Maybe your boy can complain about lack of sexual harrassment. One night stand, my ass. We'll see.
"You said 'death'."
"I meant cake."
"Ohhh, all right. Cake."
I love that man. One of my personal favs. "Do you have a flag?" And, "I'm covered in bees!"
Maybe your boy can complain about lack of sexual harrassment. One night stand, my ass. We'll see.
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You, cake or death?
Er Cake please
Well we're out of cake.
So its death or...death?
Yes.
Well I'll have the salad please.
Very good, would you like the white wine with that?
....MWAHAHAHAHA
Er Cake please
Well we're out of cake.
So its death or...death?
Yes.
Well I'll have the salad please.
Very good, would you like the white wine with that?
....MWAHAHAHAHA
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* When he said Jose was like a chick I was amused. Poor guy. But that's just funny. Jose is one crazy fucker. I love him. Awan... I kind of want to slap him. But he didn't really do anything *wrong* I guess. Can't wait to see where this goes.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My engine just idles way high. If I hit the gas .... Civilizations fall. lol
Good 'morning after' descriptions. Nice tension and set up.
Good job, you!
(Won't talk about the Spanish. You do be the foreign word bitchtress. May we bow. ;)
Nice work, R.
KD
Good 'morning after' descriptions. Nice tension and set up.
Good job, you!
(Won't talk about the Spanish. You do be the foreign word bitchtress. May we bow. ;)
Nice work, R.
KD
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HA! you actually used the "“No way José" thing! That made me laugh :)
Heh, I just don't get the 'Cake or Death' part. Gah, hurray for cliffhangers...
Heh, I just don't get the 'Cake or Death' part. Gah, hurray for cliffhangers...
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Someone's a bit insane this morning. I wonder how Awan's feeling. The jerk just fucked poor Jose and left like that. Something tells me he's an asshole. Did that steamy sex mean nothing to you!? Then again, I suppose for him it was just a typical one night stand... I mean not like Jose gave signs they were meant to see more of each other. Did kind of just spread his legs... *dodges Jose's knife*
Can't wait to see more. Jose amuses me so much.
Can't wait to see more. Jose amuses me so much.