rate_review Reviews

Umm... When I read "I think Awan's on everyone's shit list at the moment!" in your response to TK's review, I thought, "'At the moment?!' No way in hell. He is stays unless offed by KD or Gaia's machete." Awan is an ass and he is shit. He cheated on his best friend and long-time committed boyfriend because according to him he was in "a new town with an available fuck" and then threatened Jose to keep his secret made him a world class shittin' ass boyfriend and person. So I don't want to challenge how you would make him un-ass-like but whatever his story and excuses the "at the moment" ass isn't getting off that list. I was a little upset. I'll prepare myself better next time for his immaturity. Seriously, who'd risk a person who loves them, willingly to travel the distance to be at their side and knows them their whole life for a little action? Stupid ass.

On a different note, Mr. Jared was just mischievous, charming and oh so gentlemently. I fear that Jose is going to mess things up with Kale because he is like Awan in a way with his bed-hopping. Not sure if he's ever had a relationship and ever one that loved him so I might want to test some boundaries and might accidently burn Kale and his relationship. Who knows.

Really enjoyed chapters 1-15 and will eagerly wait for the next release. In the meantime, I'll be back reading your other stories because what can I say, your writing style and this stories made me laughed, got me riled and got me addicted for more :)

Until next time,
renee

I'm really enjoying this story so far. I'm mad though, cuz, Dammit, I wanna keep reading but have to get ready for work! Just thought you'd appreciate knowing its that good. :-)

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next.

Oh, but you just have to give me more! Your fic is so lively and so much fun, it truly made my day brighter. Very amusing, very good. I love Jose and hate ironing, he, he.

Anyone who manages to get listed in KD's faveys, I have to check out. A few typo's, nothing major. Interesting beginning.

This line had me cackling: "He’s also on my hate list. I swear to God it gets longer every time I leave the safety of my apartment."

EM

Wow. From Awan to Kale. I have a few thoughts in my head as to where a few things might be mapped for this tale. Alas, I've been told I tend to give away upcoming bits, so I'll keep those thoughts within my head.

Interesting tale...and tail. LOL. And very interesting bit with Kale.

EM

Ohhhh! I am loving this ^-^ Suprises and good stuff, loving the characters and the story overall so far. Totally can't wait for more!!

Wow, this has to be the best story I've ever read on AFF since I first started coming here. Honestly, your story makes the others pale in comparison! This story had me so caught up that I read the whole thing in one sitting. I love the voice of your main character, and by voice I mean his mannerisms and thoughts and etc. He's so real that he feels like someone I could easily run into in real life. He's got such a hilarious and yet attention grabbing thought pattern, really I dont know whether to laugh or be in awe at how much I can understand what he's going through. You've done an amazing job at creating characters that we can both love, Tony and his adorable Andy being good examples, and ones we hate, like that dick Awan. I cant wait to read more if there is to be more chapters and hope that Awan gets his, losing his bf wasnt pain enough the jerk! *cough* Anyway, great job! Do continue!

Wow! That was soooooo cool!!! Drools....I really hope you update soon!

awesome! i was following this on FictionPress, and discovered it here as well! why haven't updated the other site?!?!?! lolz, anyway, great work!!!