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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, this has a great plot line! the only thing is that with al of the dialoge shoved into one paragraph it is really easy to misunderstand who's talking.
schedule
June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo sounds good, can't wait to read more
schedule
June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its quite worrying when the only review i can give is a single word of 'intriguing' up date soon!