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Oh I like were this goes... sounds really interesting! :D

Thanks alot for the story! Can't wait to see what will happen next! *grins*

don't stop please!

Oh my gosh simple awesomesauce we both uploaded a story with bounty hunter in the description at like... The same exact time. Well not really. but thier right next to eachother! I totally dig watcha did, we should be like, bounty budies. I read yours, so you read mine :P Sorry, first story up 'ere. All nervous. Nice job though, but you got a wierd little aposhtraphe thing goin on. Format really makes a difference to a tired fangirls exhaused eyes :) But keep goin'!

Heya heya! A cliffhanger for the first chapter eh? :) Anyway, update plz! I'm interested.

This is really nicely written. I'm just wondering how old Damien is, I hope you don't make him to young or anything cause that's always a bit dodgy. I like the way you describe things, not many people do that. Its so hard to find well written stories that are continued. Here'S me hoping that you'll carry on writing. Love the way you end the first chapter, just can't wait to see what happens next. Hmm, i'd have loved to give you a longer review but can't for the life of me think of what else to write cept that I think this story could be really great.

Nice start. Please continue.