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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
a nice story, but you've left in a paragraph of your BETA's comments near the end. I was trying to figure out what was going on until I realised lol
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, and that says a lot since I don't usually like Slash.
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March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Definitely not bad for your... first story on aff.net ;)
Good enough for a one-shot PWP
A nice setting, and the ending part is understandable ^_^
Good enough for a one-shot PWP
A nice setting, and the ending part is understandable ^_^
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhawww! The ending is so bittersweet! You know that they -may- meet again, but it's still sad that they are parting, but on top of that, the sex was hot, and Darkyn was gentle. I love blushing boys, and Damien is just too cute :'3 Plus, I like his name a lot.
This was a really good fic! I think you did an awesome job, considering English isn't your first language. I'd be interested to read whatever else you put up in the future ^w^
This was a really good fic! I think you did an awesome job, considering English isn't your first language. I'd be interested to read whatever else you put up in the future ^w^
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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good job on your oneshot. I think you did a good job of giving us just the right amount of information and I liked both characters. I hope they meet again in the future.
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hope that you update this story soon. you kind of left us hanging. would like to see where you take this story.
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, i like this story very much! Update soon pls, i'm looking forward to reading the hotness!!
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!
This fic is really good so far! I am really liking the plot..and the hints of other things! Hehe.
I really can't wait to see what happens next, and I do hope you continue this story!
Two chapters are not enough!! Please write more!! :D
And if you're still looking for a beta, I'd be happy to be yours!
Please feel free to email me, or check out my stories to see if you like my style of writing.
Esper is my author name, I'm just not logged in right now. :)
Until next time, Happy writing!
-Esper
This fic is really good so far! I am really liking the plot..and the hints of other things! Hehe.
I really can't wait to see what happens next, and I do hope you continue this story!
Two chapters are not enough!! Please write more!! :D
And if you're still looking for a beta, I'd be happy to be yours!
Please feel free to email me, or check out my stories to see if you like my style of writing.
Esper is my author name, I'm just not logged in right now. :)
Until next time, Happy writing!
-Esper
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it is really good so far. did you have to stop there???
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omfg... *drools* Must... know... what... happens... next... *twitch*