rate_review Reviews

Nice. Very nice. I loved it.

That's beautiful

Um it was an okay story I guess. But I guess I was expecting a bit more of a built up. How did they meet? You said at the princes birthday but if his country's been at war with his tribe then how and why was he at this party? How did it come to the point of his meeting this tribe and if they've been at war for so long why would they just instantly forget all that and offer one of their up as a slave? I mean overall it's not bad but when you begin vaguely it doesn't really work all that well. Also why was the slave the one on top? even if they've developed a strong bond of friendship and then love he's still been a slave his whole life why would he suddenly forget all that and he be the one whose all shy rather than the prince. it doesn't make sense.