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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! Such a great chapter. I hope this means that Ainu will be pregnant. I hate when the pregnancy is drawn out, because usually the authors get bored with the story and never finish it and then we never get to see them happily pregnant. That was a really hot chapter. You should do more like that. Cortax is a jerk and deserves to have his balls fried too.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story and have been from the beginning. I'm just not very good about reviewing every chapter. But I do want you to know that you do have faithful readers.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG...I can't believe I haven't read this story until today! Yesterday, I saw it..but was too lazy to read it, I'm such a fool! Um, ok..lol..a bit exagerrated there..*cough* Anyways, You are off to a great start, this story is simply amazing! I love your idea, and the setting of the story really adds to it, and makes it very interesting. I hope you continue writing, you're doing a great job. Update when you can, I can't wait for the chapter! 8D
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was too funny. Cortax just needs to let it go, let it go...The fight scene was again well executed. I really liked the line about his thighs. It was very vivid.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really andgy about your lack of reviews. I absolutly ove your story ,I love it soo much that
I finished reading it at 4 am (altogh I had to get up at 7 XD)
and I came back to review because I would hate it if u were to stop writing now.
Can u kill that stupid bastad off please??????
oh and I would love some more interaction between the tow princes.
Lova ya pleasea don't stop writing
I finished reading it at 4 am (altogh I had to get up at 7 XD)
and I came back to review because I would hate it if u were to stop writing now.
Can u kill that stupid bastad off please??????
oh and I would love some more interaction between the tow princes.
Lova ya pleasea don't stop writing
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really don't like Cortax, hate him. I'm glad that Syrus beat him! haha!
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to put my name on the post above me oops!
I really don't like Cortax, hate him. I'm glad that Syrus beat him! haha!
I really don't like Cortax, hate him. I'm glad that Syrus beat him! haha!
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I'm loving this!
Ugh I hate Cortax, couldn't you have I dunno hurt him a bit more than a sword butt to the
balls, maybe chop them off?
Grr he gets me mad!
Ainu better not have to marry him, or I shall be muchly angry *nods*
I love your writing style =)
Keep up the good work!
R xx
Ugh I hate Cortax, couldn't you have I dunno hurt him a bit more than a sword butt to the
balls, maybe chop them off?
Grr he gets me mad!
Ainu better not have to marry him, or I shall be muchly angry *nods*
I love your writing style =)
Keep up the good work!
R xx
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter. The fight was well done, and I honestly think I mainly liked it because Cortax had his dignity torn to shreds. I liked learning more about the magic as well. I cannot wait to read more :)
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're very welcome! I'll leave a longer review later, since I'm supposed to be working and I need to leave now xD
Oh, I absolutely love the character Ainu! He's just too adorable.
Oh, I absolutely love the character Ainu! He's just too adorable.