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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like Faye.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Keep going, I am totally captivated.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah..lol..he fried his penis! Cortax seriously deserved that, he's such a meanie. I'm glad they finally got together...I'm sort of wondering if Ainu will get pregnant because of that? oh..that would be really interesting. Anyways, Keep up the good work, you're doing great! I mean it. I'm not lying, I'm so addicted to your story! Well, update when you can, I'm looking forward to your next chapter! 8D
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter! ;) I hope that Ainu gets pregnant with Syrus' child!
Hahaha! Cortax has a "fried penis"! That is hilerious! I really love this story!
Can't wait for more! :D
Hahaha! Cortax has a "fried penis"! That is hilerious! I really love this story!
Can't wait for more! :D
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for Ainu. Both of them just can't seem to get any happiness. I'm excited to see what will happen next though, especially after what he and Syrus did. I love this story, and I'm glad your not going to stop updating because you aren't getting as many reviews as you used to. I'd really hate to see this go. Can't wait for more!
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh that was hot!
Grrr evilevil Cortax, poor Ainu getting smacked by him but good on him
for frying his penis mwhahahaha!
Buuutt they had smexy sex yar? Does that mean Ainu's gonna get pregnant?
ahhh the suspense in this story. It can go so many ways!
I can't wait for the next update!
Hurry up and write =P
Reike x
Grrr evilevil Cortax, poor Ainu getting smacked by him but good on him
for frying his penis mwhahahaha!
Buuutt they had smexy sex yar? Does that mean Ainu's gonna get pregnant?
ahhh the suspense in this story. It can go so many ways!
I can't wait for the next update!
Hurry up and write =P
Reike x
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wah so sad that stupid jerk how dare he hurt Ainu, I;m glad he got his penis fried :)
That was a very sad chapter and Sirys being sp sweet made it even sader cause they can't be together Q_Q
I hpe we have a baby showing up soon (I love babies so cute)
I can't wait until u update again and thanx so much for posting this so soon.
You are sucha wonderful writer that when I read your story it comes to life for me. I kinda invision the castle to be kind of like the LOTR castle where the elfs live.
again thanx for the chapter
Love Aki
That was a very sad chapter and Sirys being sp sweet made it even sader cause they can't be together Q_Q
I hpe we have a baby showing up soon (I love babies so cute)
I can't wait until u update again and thanx so much for posting this so soon.
You are sucha wonderful writer that when I read your story it comes to life for me. I kinda invision the castle to be kind of like the LOTR castle where the elfs live.
again thanx for the chapter
Love Aki
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw dammit! I came late! I was going to review again, but taking that break to read your story before left me with more work, and made me even busier xD. And, I mostly blame you for updating way too fast! Gah! Really all your fault ^___^
So, a long review huh? I'm sorry, but it may consist of mostly exclamation marks xD .Ok, well, the thing I was really excited about was how you were going to get around the whole "arranged marriage" thing [or have I already commented on this?] and what would happen to Cortax [evil bastard]. Bleh! But your recent chapter just threw me off! I wasn't expecting that!!! And now, I wonder....if you're going to make Ainu pregnant after that encounter, which will further complicate things. I can just imagine, Ainu trying to sleep with Cortax [after he finds out he's pregnant] to make it seem like the child is his. Oh! And that mysterious character...will we find out who that is? I think you hinted at him again in the chapter with the tournament...or that was just Cortax...I'm not sure...Oh! And Ainu's mortality...now THATS a milestone O__O I can't wait to see how you make everything turn out!!
Oh, and the male preg, I think the way your doing it is different from the way I read in other stories...or it's the same and I just haven't noticed Q__Q. Heh, you can tell I'm obsessed with mpreg, I'm just hooked on it.
Wel, lastly, I would like to say, I LOVE YOUR STORIES! And your imagination^^
....Your my very first long review I've ever given to somebody, so 'Yay!' I did a long review!!
Oh crap...I still gotta review Burning the Stars O_______O
So, a long review huh? I'm sorry, but it may consist of mostly exclamation marks xD .Ok, well, the thing I was really excited about was how you were going to get around the whole "arranged marriage" thing [or have I already commented on this?] and what would happen to Cortax [evil bastard]. Bleh! But your recent chapter just threw me off! I wasn't expecting that!!! And now, I wonder....if you're going to make Ainu pregnant after that encounter, which will further complicate things. I can just imagine, Ainu trying to sleep with Cortax [after he finds out he's pregnant] to make it seem like the child is his. Oh! And that mysterious character...will we find out who that is? I think you hinted at him again in the chapter with the tournament...or that was just Cortax...I'm not sure...Oh! And Ainu's mortality...now THATS a milestone O__O I can't wait to see how you make everything turn out!!
Oh, and the male preg, I think the way your doing it is different from the way I read in other stories...or it's the same and I just haven't noticed Q__Q. Heh, you can tell I'm obsessed with mpreg, I'm just hooked on it.
Wel, lastly, I would like to say, I LOVE YOUR STORIES! And your imagination^^
....Your my very first long review I've ever given to somebody, so 'Yay!' I did a long review!!
Oh crap...I still gotta review Burning the Stars O_______O
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh...and...."fried Penis"....BWAHAHAHAHA!!! That was awesome xD
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and was that first review long enough to count as a long review? Wow...3 reviews from me...xD...I gotta stop getting your hopes up in thinking your getting a million reviews from other people [which you surely deserve].
I would also like to point out some spelling/grammar mistakes you might want to check on! I noticed them in all your other stories, but they're not really all that bad. Any reader can easily convert them to the proper way themselves in their heads and move on in the story, so they're not really all that major.
I would also like to point out some spelling/grammar mistakes you might want to check on! I noticed them in all your other stories, but they're not really all that bad. Any reader can easily convert them to the proper way themselves in their heads and move on in the story, so they're not really all that major.