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you can't stop there!!!!!!!
i NEED to know what's going to happen lol
you're frying my brain!!!!
can't wait for more :D

Ahh Deutsh! Ich habe das Deutsche Abitur gemacht. Letztes Jahr habe ich Deutsch durchgefallen =( Ich brauche 3 punkte mehr für ein C!
Anyway, I apologise for massacaring any German grammar in that sentence, it's never been my strong point =P
Ainu's pregnant! I knew it! I soooo did!
Does that mean bye bye Cortax?
I soo hope so. I think you should accidently lock him in a room full of snakes, or push him off a cliff. Either will do, I'm not fussy!
I like Faye, she's so cool. Maybe she could kick Cortax's butt? That would be fun!
I hope Ainu's dad finds a way to break off their marriage without their country being forced to go to war. That would be bad.
I'll try to update before you go on holiday!
Great chapter!
*hugs*
R x

This story is really developing well. I'm enjoying it very much. That last chapter was a bit of a cliff hanger though. I can't wait to find out everyone's reaction to Ainu's pregnancy. Especially Syrus. Wouldn't the fact that Ainu and Syrus had sex and even more so that Ainu is pregnant with Syrus's baby mean that they have bonded and that Ainu is now able to live as long as Syrus? Not sure what else could bond them more. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for such an engaging story.

Lol...I love Faye..she is just so awesome! Yay..he's pregnant, I can't wait to see the look on Syrus' face when he finds out. 8D Keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next chapter! 8D

Haha, ok. Of course I still love your story! But, damn your cliffhangers!
[I KNEW Ainu would get pregnant!]

I love how things are starting to come together with this. I'm especially glad to see that Ainu and Syrus will be able to be together, although I hoped they would when it became obvious that Ainu was pregnant. I am curious to see what will happen with Cortax though. I cannot wait to read more!

I don't know how I missed two new chs but awesome job! The springs were super hawt! And I don't mean the water, LOL! I am so glad that some one like Faye is on the verge of putting two and two together.

ahhaaaa you're mean! haha
Yeah Awan and Cortax should be shoved in the same room together!
Poor Ainu, I just wanna hug him. His father seems to be in a hard place, still
he shouldn't make Ainu marry the snake!
Great update!
Hugs!
R xx

[Don't worry, I wasn't expecting you to reply to all 3 separately xD]

Hey, I'm sorry if what I had said about your grammar/spelling sounded rude, but I wasn't trying to sound rude. So, I'm really sorry about that and I feel bad that you took it the wrong way T____T. And, I know that most of the authors on here were all raised with a different language, and that english is their second language.

Oh, and I'm Canadian, by the way. Canadian enlgish is a bit different from American english, so I don't really notice some things xDD

Aww..I feel so saorry for Ainu! If he does get pregnant, I hope it's not Cortax's child but Syrius! 8D..that would be wonderful..lol. Thnx for updating, you'r doing wonderfully..I'm so addicted to your story! I can't wait for your next chapter, keep up the good work. 8D