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for Angel's Song

by Jetfire

person aki
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Q_Q I will have to work on the male part. But at least I got the Hot thing all worked out Q)_(Q

Now how am I suposed to turn male (I would srsly give up my boobs just to hear you wonderful stories XD)

haha Jk Jk (srsly I;m not a freak..................or a lesbian XP)

Btw I loves the reveal and the fact that you did not rush with a lemon.

Is Cortax baned from the city or is he being keept prisoner.

Btw your pregnant Aniu is loly and hilorious especialy the part about cucumbers and creme that make me laugh XD

Love ya and have a nice vacation <3
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I love this story. They both, Ainu (nice name btw) and Syrus are so cute together. I'm curious for their further development. Please give me MORE!!!!!!!
Lots of Greets
Sandra
person Zelasii
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I know xD

Oh, and have a great Holiday!
person Ari90
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Ainu and Syrus are going to get married!(In your face Cortax! :P)
Nice chapter!
person aki
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhh sry for not reviewing the last 2 chapies my internet was down and I just fixed it today.

I was so hapy to see three chapters of this XD

I totaly love you btw so I demand u marry me and tell me lots of stories XD

I was wondering are you going to end the story now or will we get to meet the baby?

Lova aki
person Reike
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha thank you for the update!
Awww yeh! Eleven warriors, suck on that Cortax!
And yay Ainu and Syrus will get married whoop!
I just hope Cortax doesn't make any more trouble.
Wohoo for English spelling!
R xx
person Aida
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah that was one beautiful and really sensual chapter ! I found this story today and read all the chapters at once.I hope you have a lot more coming ! Aida
person Jae
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww yay!

btw- i do hope that Ainu castrates Cortax.
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah finally a break in the confusion. The kings?!
person Ari90
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Ainu is pregnant, and by Syrus too! I am so glad that Ainu and Syurs can be togehter! I really love where the story is going.
I can't believe you left us on a cliff hanger, though! T_T