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Oh wow! Here I haven't been checking this site for a while and you've made 2 updates... Yay! ^^ Cortex is dead and you said this story is almost finished... T_T How sad and happy... I like this story. ^^ Anyway, thanks for the update and the wonderful story! ^^

I'd like to tell you that I can't believe more people aren't letting you know how wonderful this story is. I started reading it last night and was reluctant to have to stop just to get some sleep. Please don't give up on this story just because people are too selfish to review. I know how much the responses can mean, but keep in mind that some people just don't know what to say so early in a story. I'm only to chapter 3, but anxious to keep reading. Since tonight is my night off, trust me, I'll be right here at the computer, anxious to find out just what road these 2 will be traveling. You are a really great writer and have a huge talent. You've obviously put a lot of effort into researching the background for this-- if not, you're a definite genius in the way you write, make your words flow like the lyrics to a song. Please keep writing and sharing your wonderful gift with us. Thank you for giving us your gifts of time, talent and ability to entertain and make us feel we're right there, within the story. Keep up the great work.

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I just wanted to add that my last remarks were not aimed at ANYone who has reviewed here. I only got through with chapter 3 and saw the author's comments about reviews going down from 7 to 6 and then 1. Common sense would have told me to check, but I didn't go to the later chapters or to the review section to see if reviews had increased. I wanted to impart some encouragement to the author to keep going, no matter what. ALL the reviews (I've since read them) are acknowledged and again, I didn't mean to offend anyone.

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I just started reading this story so I am only at chapter 7. I just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying this story so far. I love ainu's big emerald green eyes that are always swimming with tears. I can just picture them in my head - so cute! I have a weakness for m-preg stories so I am really having fun with this one. I also like that Ainu can take care of himself. I hope he will be the one to give our friend Cortax the final heave-ho. LOL. Keep up the good work.

NO!!! cliffie *cry*
I can´t wait for continuation.
pls make that Ainu and babies are ok *puppy eyes*

I am loving this story. The images of Ainu in labor had me laughing at my desk today. I don't understand why after having those warning dreams, Ainu would still pick up the babies and take them into the very danger that he dreamt about. If you should go back to revise this story, I would love for some of the important moments to be given more attention. Like the wedding, a wedding night love scene would be nice. Also a little more time could be spent on the birth of the babies and the moments after. Like a description of the little ones and the parents general reaction to them. It is good to get the story written while you are inspired though because you can always go back to flesh out the details. I can't wait to see the rest of the story.

This is a very good story. And the plot is good as well. ^^ And they got the twins! <3 I hope they'll be reunited and have a chance to spend some familytime. :) Hope you'll update soon so we'll get to read more of this story. ^^

I just hoped they helped and I did notice.

omg I was thinking about your story a while ago. Q-Q SO SAD.

oMG will the ears grow back??

can someone chop of fis stupid dick

god I hate him so much Q_Q

thans for updating your one of my favorite writers <3

Awww babies!
What are their names? You have to name them!!
Lovely update, I know what it feels like being stressed
so don't worry about the updates =)
R xx