schedule
November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting me so hooked, I had not reviewed till now cos I could not stop reading and I am so glad I found this gem of a story. Enjoy a good love story and mpreg just makes it even more addictive and sweet, love is love and a child coming out of love is all good.
schedule
October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi !
I really liked your story, the plot was good : I enjoyed reading it :)
I also thought the name of the babies were very cool : Anael is a French name and the male version of mine: Anaelle ... very good choice ! ;)
Thank you for sharing your stories, I am a huge fan of Mpreg and sometimes the explanation is not very satisfying, I thought the idea of magic like that was good.
Anaelle
I really liked your story, the plot was good : I enjoyed reading it :)
I also thought the name of the babies were very cool : Anael is a French name and the male version of mine: Anaelle ... very good choice ! ;)
Thank you for sharing your stories, I am a huge fan of Mpreg and sometimes the explanation is not very satisfying, I thought the idea of magic like that was good.
Anaelle
schedule
May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story :)
schedule
December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is great so far! I can't wait to read the rest! I know you've already finished it but I just wanted to say thankyou!
schedule
May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was really nice epilogue :)
schedule
May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay so I know it's been a long time since I've done a proper review so I figured I would. This story was written for me and all. It's only fair.
So yes, I looooved the story, simply wonderful, and fun to read. I loved the ending most of all. I'm a big fan of the stories that come full circle. Tie to one small thing in the beginning but that seemed to be the basis of everything. Makes everything feel complete and wrapped up and tied in a nice little bundle. Makes me really really happy. So thank you for making the perfect ending. I think this was one story that I actually felt a little lift at the end, usually I'm left just wanting more, like it was a cut off. But this, really really nice. Like when I'm playing a piece in band and there's that last soft, perfect note and we get just the right cut off, quiet and beautiful and it just rings before fades away just right and you're so moved and feel so complete that you don't want to clap because clapping just seems so inappropriate. That's how I feel. This was beyond words. Amazing. There have been very few endings on here that I've thought of as good as this. I actually paused my music, read it again and just closed my eyes to let it sink in. Then I went back and read it all again. Doesn't get old, not at all. Thank you so much, thank you thank you thank you. It makes me feel like I've been given closure for everything in my life. XD Stupid and silly but it's just this utterly full feeling of peace and rightfulness. Written perfectly, ended perfectly. No flourish or extra decoration. It was just the way it needed to be.
I also like how the sex wasn't the main point of this chapter, that would have seemed really wrong. Trust me, I like my smut, but still, perfect, I can't say that enough. The rest of the story could have been absolute shit (Trust me it wasn't, it was absolutely perfect and beautiful and awesome) and that ending would have made it amazing. As is it just made it the perfect story even more perfect. Though I don't suppose that's possible, but in this case it is. You astound me with your writing. People love what you write and I keep hoping that maybe, maybe, if I'm luck I'll get that many views, that many comments, that many people who say things even half as nice. You've inspired me XD Thank you for that. Thank you for writing this story, and thank you for being one of my best friends. Thank you for everything you've ever said or done to/for me. Thank you for writing this story, and thank you for ending it so absolutely perfectly.
Much endless love,
Laith
So yes, I looooved the story, simply wonderful, and fun to read. I loved the ending most of all. I'm a big fan of the stories that come full circle. Tie to one small thing in the beginning but that seemed to be the basis of everything. Makes everything feel complete and wrapped up and tied in a nice little bundle. Makes me really really happy. So thank you for making the perfect ending. I think this was one story that I actually felt a little lift at the end, usually I'm left just wanting more, like it was a cut off. But this, really really nice. Like when I'm playing a piece in band and there's that last soft, perfect note and we get just the right cut off, quiet and beautiful and it just rings before fades away just right and you're so moved and feel so complete that you don't want to clap because clapping just seems so inappropriate. That's how I feel. This was beyond words. Amazing. There have been very few endings on here that I've thought of as good as this. I actually paused my music, read it again and just closed my eyes to let it sink in. Then I went back and read it all again. Doesn't get old, not at all. Thank you so much, thank you thank you thank you. It makes me feel like I've been given closure for everything in my life. XD Stupid and silly but it's just this utterly full feeling of peace and rightfulness. Written perfectly, ended perfectly. No flourish or extra decoration. It was just the way it needed to be.
I also like how the sex wasn't the main point of this chapter, that would have seemed really wrong. Trust me, I like my smut, but still, perfect, I can't say that enough. The rest of the story could have been absolute shit (Trust me it wasn't, it was absolutely perfect and beautiful and awesome) and that ending would have made it amazing. As is it just made it the perfect story even more perfect. Though I don't suppose that's possible, but in this case it is. You astound me with your writing. People love what you write and I keep hoping that maybe, maybe, if I'm luck I'll get that many views, that many comments, that many people who say things even half as nice. You've inspired me XD Thank you for that. Thank you for writing this story, and thank you for being one of my best friends. Thank you for everything you've ever said or done to/for me. Thank you for writing this story, and thank you for ending it so absolutely perfectly.
Much endless love,
Laith
schedule
March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, I'm enjoying reading this. Good work.
schedule
March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why I didn't read this before. I just read it in one go, I couldn't stop.
Cortax is a one big a**hole! I'm so happy that Ainu got rid of him. I hope Cortax will get what he deserves, in the end.
And Ainu and Syrus. They make a very good couple and it's good that they are together. They belong to each other. And the twins, happy to see that everything is ok.
Very nice! :)
xx
Cortax is a one big a**hole! I'm so happy that Ainu got rid of him. I hope Cortax will get what he deserves, in the end.
And Ainu and Syrus. They make a very good couple and it's good that they are together. They belong to each other. And the twins, happy to see that everything is ok.
Very nice! :)
xx
schedule
March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read wrong, Curtax is dead? GO AINU!
xx
xx
schedule
March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is not end yet, right?