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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Very interesting! I'm sad for Vynzent, though. I hope Aries will be able to help him. Great start for a story that I know will be a great. You've got an awesome writing technique. Though, I did get confused when you changed to point of view from Vynzent to Aries in the same paragraph. :) Again, great story. xD