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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
xD Haha forgot to sign in but im to lazy o.o
ethir way i love this story and need more of it!!!!! sooooooo goood plzzzzz uptodate
ethir way i love this story and need more of it!!!!! sooooooo goood plzzzzz uptodate
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that's a cool ghost! :)
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww thats really...sad? happy...depressing....hot
haha =] i loved it!
ooo continue with this one pleaseeeee
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haha =] i loved it!
ooo continue with this one pleaseeeee
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*~ wow that was just...wow. hope there will be more? :D ~*
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story ^_^
Can't wait for an update~!
Can't wait for an update~!
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely angst. :)
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow
this is really sexy and really heart breaking
um i know you said you didn't like it when people just write 'please more', so how about a suggestion?
what if you write another chapter to this and this time the main character does reach out and grap one of the hands and...
then i have no idea but maybe you could think of something? cuz you're so awesome? please?
this is really sexy and really heart breaking
um i know you said you didn't like it when people just write 'please more', so how about a suggestion?
what if you write another chapter to this and this time the main character does reach out and grap one of the hands and...
then i have no idea but maybe you could think of something? cuz you're so awesome? please?
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one shot, thanks for sharing!
I'm not going to scream "PLEASE MORE!!!"..........
But if you ever did decide to write a follow-up to
this, that would be fantastic!
Thanks again. ^_^
I'm not going to scream "PLEASE MORE!!!"..........
But if you ever did decide to write a follow-up to
this, that would be fantastic!
Thanks again. ^_^
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fine; I won't beg for more, but I must say it would be interesting to see where you take this if you decide to continue. I can see it going in many marvelous directions, the way you write. Anyway, I hope you aren't depressed anymore. I'm off to read more, you have me hooked, though it's kind of depressing seeing how good you are. It makes me realize a lot of flaws in my own writing, but we all have our own styles so I should try to cheer up, no?
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story had me hooked from the first word till the last. The atmosphere you created was so intense it's actually hard to describe. I could nearly FEEL the loneliness, the fear to touch those hands because it would make it all too real and the longing.
While this definitely has the potential for a longer story(...as in from the beginning to the end), the one-shot shows a single moment that is perfect enough to communicate everything this story has to tell. Great job!
While this definitely has the potential for a longer story(...as in from the beginning to the end), the one-shot shows a single moment that is perfect enough to communicate everything this story has to tell. Great job!