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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*~ :D I really wonder how you wrote chapter 7. It's like going back farther than the basic of sensations when we were little babies. Its amazing! Keep it up! ~*
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
thats so cute....=/
UPDATE!! ahh i love ur writing =]
its really creattive
<33
thats so cute....=/
UPDATE!! ahh i love ur writing =]
its really creattive
<33
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G YAY!....I'm so happy that you updated! Can't wait til they start having decent conversations lol
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a great story. The premise is amazing and wonderful. Now this last unexpected turn has me head over heels.
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 6
Nice description of Abel's transformation to corporeal body in last two chappies. Good job with presenting both POVs. This is a story of reincarnation, isn't it?
"He was hit with the sharp smell of copper, then he knew, he knew, what it was. Blood."
I liked that line for some reason.
Would Abel remember his past or he has to start over? So far I think he can't even read and write and has a pretty clouded thought process.
Nice description of Abel's transformation to corporeal body in last two chappies. Good job with presenting both POVs. This is a story of reincarnation, isn't it?
"He was hit with the sharp smell of copper, then he knew, he knew, what it was. Blood."
I liked that line for some reason.
Would Abel remember his past or he has to start over? So far I think he can't even read and write and has a pretty clouded thought process.
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! Hope that you continue with the story. Can't wait for the next chapter. So keep up the good work.
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How do I know when you update? Because honestly, I don't really want to look at the story everyday to check for a new chapter. But if that's the only thing I can do, then I'll do it.
I really love the story. So please do update soon. =]
I really love the story. So please do update soon. =]
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW...That was..Heart wrenching. I absolutely love how you write, it's beautiful! I can't wait for more..
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say its really good and its just getting better and I hope that you continue with the stroy
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Astonishing! Novel! What more can I say - except 'Please - more' ... 'Purr