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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah good stuff ill have to check out your other stuff. can't wait for the next update.
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! YOU ACTUALLY CONTINUED THIS STORY!!!!! XD I remember when you said not to even mention about continueing it, because it was a one-shot, but I'm SOOOOO glad you changed your mind!!! :D It's so CUTE and suspenceful! I can't wait to find out more about Abel's past, and I loved the connection his name has too ^_^ VERY creative! Awww, they're just so adorable together! I have a feeling Abel wont be able to control his anger if some dude was to hiton Jacob tho... scary XD lol
Continue soon please! ^^
Continue soon please! ^^
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww
i hope there's more of this
like a lot more
like that this isn't even the halfway mark yet
because it's so good
so so good
*worships you*
i hope there's more of this
like a lot more
like that this isn't even the halfway mark yet
because it's so good
so so good
*worships you*
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww they are so happy. great chapter can't wait for more.
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awee.
yay!
haha cute.
<3
yay!
haha cute.
<3
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o wow i fell in love with your story! so descriptive and it reels in the viewers. we got to know both of the characters.
abel seems very fragile now.
abel seems very fragile now.
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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nnnnnngh
don't stop THERE!!!!
so hot
must have more
er. I mean please. heh.
don't stop THERE!!!!
so hot
must have more
er. I mean please. heh.
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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
noooo..you don't get to leave it there!!
but great job as always, i love your writings!!! you're just awesome!!
but great job as always, i love your writings!!! you're just awesome!!
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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh abel is just... so adorable! i feel bad for him.. but i wanted to ask.. the whole covered in blood and new sensations thing. it's like a representation of being born right? at least thats what i got from it >.> maybe im on crack? did i ask this already. man. still good work i really enjoy this fic a lot and can' wait for more.
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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! It's so cute and the characters' so loveable. Chapters are a bit short though but they're still worth waiting for, lol. It's a really great story, unique too.