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I really can't wait for this to be updated!
Don't leave us hanging!!
I can't wait to see Abel progress in human-life.

Wow I really like this story, I remember reading the first chap a while ago but now I read the all of it and like it even more! :)

Wow, I wish I had an imaginary friend like that! *wink, wink*
Awesome story by the way, very arousing .*winks again*

I love all the little details included in this story.
You are such a wonderful author.

You are increasingly my favorite author on AFF. This is my favorite story thus far; I just love the plot and JacobXAbel.
The explanations on Abel's " birth" were so interesting and him experiencing everything as if he was a fully aware baby was so well written.
I really hope you decide to continue and update this story soon.

please continue this story! It's very good!!

It's not true! You give Jacob waaay more then sex! Poor Ian! *Sniffles* I love your writing as always.

very good chapter! :D

hot
ah, so worth the wait

This is just fantastic, you've out done yourself. It's so, so original. The concept of being born into an adult body, and being a baby in so many ways is just amazing. I adore the characters, but then again, I adore all your characters. I couldn't stop reading till I reached the end. I shall babble here first before I go back to read my fav parts again. The story's backdrop was also well done, the whole process of Abel's emotions changing, evolving, was wonderfully done. Parts of the story was so intense, at other times light hearted, I loved every experience. The joy Abel had at each new discovery resonated in me, the reader. I also like the way Jacob felt, awestruck at being the center of some one's existence, at being whole heartedly worshipped and declared perfect. It's such a perfectly mundane wish every one has and I can empathize very well with it. It's an amazing read, absolutely spellbinding. I can't wait for more...