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for Imaginary Friend

by Lunarwench

schedule March 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wonderful and fascinating story. It definitely left me wanting more. The dialogue was very natural and flowed well. Thanks for sharing this. Xoxo Robin

schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God... I loved it... That's really all I can say. I loved it.
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. It's a really different idea, and there is this perfect mix of really unolique plot and completely beleivable relationship develpment...not to mention lots of delicious smut. I say two gold stars for this one.
person Zoshia
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was just browsing around and thought this story sounded interesting so I gave it a try. Read it from start to finish without getting up it was so good! Loved it. How you described Abel learning all these sensations we feel everyday was just perfect. I wish I got back story for what happened in his previous life, but whatevs... They're happy now and that's all that matters. GREAT JOB! ^,^
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg, i thought this was a one-shot at first! i'm so glad it's NOT! YAY!
person Coco
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just spent my day off from school reading this. This is such a sweet story. I love it with all my heart! If only some famous artist were to come upon it and create a manga or anime. ;w; I looooove it and I've said it before. It's too beautiful to bear! x))
Thank you soo much for this. ((((:

<333333
person kylee
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I have to stop to do a little dance! This story rocks! I am at the end of chapter 6 and I am just loving this story. My head was filled with so many questions and ideas when I started reading this story. My theory was that maybe Abel had done something bad to Jacob in a past life and was now bound to him in this life as penance. I will find out more as I read through this great story. Your writing is excellent and the plot and characters are great and stimulating. Keep up the good work.
person kylee
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww! It's over. I am so happy with the ending. What a wonderful story. i wish there were some oneshots too. I love this couple so much. i loved every minute of this story. Love Love Love. I think you chose a good point to end the story. we can see that Abel is becoming more confident and dominant and that he will make it successfully in the world. Good job. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww
it's completely different from how i thought it would end when i first started reading it
which is totally awesome because it's so different and interesting
yay ^^

-ariesgirl
person Anon
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story so much :) I thought the ending was a little abrupt at first as it seemed to jump from the last chapter, but then as it carried on I got back into the flow of it, lol. I adore the emotion of the piece and how the tone of the story changed as it progressed, it's really remarkable and quite romantic. Loved it :)