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by GardenOfBlack

schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
just read the first chapter and I'm hooked. I will read the rest after work which is soon yay! Thanks you for posting and can't wait to read the rest
schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
some complex emotions going on there, fighting with himself over his feelings for Aidan then for Jimmy and the revelation he tried to leave before. Interesting. On to the next!
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So I noticed this had been edited and was wondering if there was a chance of you continuing? I may help to convince you if you knew that I have read this story so many times, and every time it captivated me more than before, only to have my heart torn from my chest when I realized it wasn't finished. What cruelty is this? :( Anyway, this review might persuade you if you haven't been already so it's worth a shot eh?
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omg i loved this story me want more, it makes you wonder if the expression "dug his own grave" aplies here, i like how that one that make the first avanses was jonny itself, and cant hope to think that maibe adiel has a plan to arrive early and both of them will get screw XD please more more or ill make a riot XD ;)
person kylee123
schedule April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I remember this wonderful story. I am glad that you are still working on it. I am rereading the chapters to catch up with the story.
person kylee123
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a fabulous story. I can't wait to read some more. I wonder why Aiden has become so cold to Johnny. Could it be guilt? I love the attraction between Johnny and Jimmy. I wonder if Jimmy has a touch of the supernatural? Please continue this story. The writing quality is excellent. I feel sorry for poor Charity.
person Qiana
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter I love it
person Qiana
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really good please update soon
person Kryst Sutures
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting so far. Really well written. I feel so sorry for Johnny. When Aiden blatantly ignored him and put down all his hard work like that I really felt his pain. I can't wait to see what happens next. Excellent start. I like the plot and the characters so far.
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting story. can't wait to read more. please update soon.