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for A Dark and Stormy Night

by shadowrunner54

person Lectrice
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi Aaron,

I read this story about a month ago but its taken me this long to get around to reviewing since I wasn't registered before. I think you should continue with this tale, since you've obviously taken the time to set things up for the next plot development (whatever you decide that should be). The characters are off the beaten track in terms of stereotypes, which I thought was great. Please post another chapter and if your muse is feeling particularly generous another chapter in the You've Got Problems? story would be very much appreciated.

Best wishes in your writing

Leguleian
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, there have been a real lack in good romance stories and this looks to be a ggod one in the making. I hope you are continuing it.
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh please continue. this sounds like a really great and sweet story.
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice setting! The characters are not the typical kind you often see in high school stories, so I found this really refreshing. I kind of like James for what he is. Not conventionally hot or whatever, but he seems to have this quiet toughness going about him despite of his emotional hardship which makes reading his viewpoint fascinating for a girl like me. Keep up the good work.
person LOVELUST
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I am loving this story. I hope you update again soon.
person doloris
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just woke up to find out the you posted another chapter and I am loving your story so far and what I mean is that you have to post another chapter real soon. I feel bad for Kat and that fart turd needs to come to grip and stop being so nasty towards her.

So pleeeease update soon!
person LOVELUST
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very promising start. I do hope you continue.