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for A Dark and Stormy Night

by shadowrunner54

person Malika21
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Shakes head* I can totally feel where Kat was coming from. I had lost mostly all of the people that were close to my heart because of rumors that were said about me, but I can understand where James coming from too because like my friends...he only did it to protect her. I have that courageous strength of not caring what people would say just like Kat but I guess James doesn't know how to not care of what people "would" say about Kat. I mean, people talk because of their own insecurities and James gave those people what they want instead of what he, himself, wanted and that was Kat. I THINK, if you truly love/like someone, you don't really care what people will say because one it's none of their business and two...ummm they need to keep their heads in their big ummm...THEIR BIG BUTTS YEA!! And live in it also.

James will come around and realizes that he had messed up big time, but will Kat take him back though? DUN DUN DUN!! :) Great Job!! Please update when you have the chance.
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
James is an ass, it has been coming at me subtly for most of the fic but now it has been proven, and don't try to defend him. If he ever want's to get back with Kat he better do some world class groveling/pleading and lots of presents and then she should still kick him in the groin. Now update quickly, I must know in what way she will get back at mr douche.
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like this story
i hope u update soon
i want to know what happens next.
person lovelyl
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a better story than I originally thought. Well done and keep going.
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I need more!!!!don't leave me hanging here lol great fic hun update soon x
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kat is too forgiving (I think) and HA!! To James, just cause she's heavier doesn't mean she isn't pretty. I am happy you updated, can't wait for the next chapter. Although I still think James is a jerk, but he is a teenage boy so it isn't easy for him to be nice I suppose.
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
arghhh i need more! update soon please!!!!!!
person Lectrice
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello again, really enjoyed chapter 5 - it brought the two characters inner conflict into sharp focus. I eagerly await the next chapter.
person LOVELUST
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. I hope you update soon. Love this story.


You spelled bet wrong. It doesn't have an a.
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am happy you updated but seriously depressed by the contents of the chapter. Poor Katlyn, are people really like that? guys suck!