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September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story you have here. I really enjoy how Jareth is a kind and compassionate master. So often in these stories, the master is a brute with little or no regard for the slaves that they purchase. Your story is a nice breath of fresh air and I'm excited to see what will happen. I can't wait to see Jareth go crazy on the guy that has stolen/molested Kaden. Take care and have fun writing the next chapter!
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September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. Kaden and Jareth are both winning characters and they seem to be very happy with each other. Kaden seems to have a lot of hidden talents. I hope they get to spend a lot of quality time in the bedroom teaching each other about love. I hope Kaden is good a defense and teaches that bad guy a lesson. Please keep writing. The story is great and it is flowing very well.
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April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loving it I'll keep looking for more later
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter! and its fine there was no sex >.> you would just have to make up in the next one XD jk can't wait for the next one
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good Work!
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet and cute. I loved it! If there's a way to be alerted about the next chapter, add me to it!
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. A few spelling mistakes here and there, but other than that it was perfect. You did great for your first lemon. ^^ I can't wait to hear more from you! ^^
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. The confusion and uncertainty of the normally smooth business tycoon was wonderful and Kaden was just so sweet and cute the reader wants to cuddle him...among other things >>>grins<<< I know AFF readers don't normally review alot, but I hope others are reading this story too !!! I hope you continue it.
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very sneaky of you to leave us hanging like that !!!! I am enjoying this and do hope you continue.
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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice!