rate_review Reviews

This is one interesting story! Seems to me Gabe's parents (and maybe even a few others in the town) know more than they're letting on. What happened 10 years ago and who's been sneaking into the house? Ooh, can't wait for more!!

I was like 'nah' when I started reading, cause, let's face it, it's hard to find good fiction that you don't have to read 20 pages of until it actually gets good, but your story totally sucked me in, and it didn't even have any explicit violence or sex scenes (which is what the average pervert like myself kindly looks forward to)! So, to sum things up, I love Gabriel's witty humour, I keep my fingers crossed for whatever you got planned for him and Spence and I really wanna know what happened on March 12th (if it was May 12th, I apologize, but the fangirlism inteferes with my mental capacity)10 years ago. So... please, pretty please don't abandon it?

Love,
Tsai.

i don't know why, but i get the feeling that someone died on march 12th, was it? i think that it was either a sybling of gabe's or gabe himself died, and his parents replaced him. now i know this is very out-there, but it's just what i think. i also think that his parents aren't going to tell him the secret. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! the broken glass and blood also is weird. is it a sign of the secret?? did gabe get seriously hurt 10 years ago with broken glass??? I'LL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
ASOTA

You're a very original and creative writer.
I like it!
keep it comin'

I like it. Please do continue.