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Oh SWEET! That was hot!! You should definately have them do it in a library or in a church..how sacrilegous!

ooh, just where WILL they go next? hahaha, I can't wait to see that question answered. At a concert? That stumped me because I didn't think it would be insane enough to actually be in the crowd. HA, yet you've pleasantly surprised me by really making them have sex in the crowd. Poor Ichiro, I have self esteem issues too (but that's because it's all true). Thanks for the update, I'm excited to see more!

Ooooh, baby that was hot! Keep up the good smutty work!

Holy crap! Tell me there will be more!? Please!

:3 wow, verry hot to read. I always thought that people who had sex in public places was only in fantasy...until I heard some of my coworkers talking about boyfriends. ;D but I love reading abut it in fiction too. I thought I recognized the name ichiro, but i don't (sheesh, it's too soon to go senile at my age). at least, I thought i recognized it as an anime name ;3

I can't wait to see more of what you've written!

Very sexy. Would love to see more of these two. Edward sounds hot with all those piercings. A more detailed description of their appearances would be nice.

Freakin' sweet, that was hot! I can't wait for more updates, if there's any.