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for Rage: Ashes to Ashes

by neichan

schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just getting interesting. Will there be any more updates?
person Radar
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like that story too. You show a great skill at writing and I really enjoy reading it.
I think thow that you should post in Original-Slash also because I think you will get more attention there than here.
I would love to read another chapter soon.
Veronika from Germany
person angelmay
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far,I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, neichan,
I absolutely love your writing and was pleasantly surprised to see this story. Without any doubt, this is promissing to be a good read :)

The story of how 'William' came to America was done so well. Not too lenghy, but enough to know what's going on. Why did his resquer call him 'William'? They haven't met before, I assume?

Waiting for the next chapter with anticipation :D