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for Envy

by Purerockerchick

schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I read it from beginning to end - brilliantly written. Can't wait to read the ending =)
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.. short but yh it was good... i want paulll... he sounds sooooooooooooo hotttttttttt
he sounds like my perfect man... i want himmm
update soon please
person LAMBM
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good as always!!!
person Lea
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I just read through it in one sitting. Wonderful! The characters are very real and believable and (I won't say 'the plot' since there really isn't much of one) the theme of these one shots is perfect. I need to find a guy like Paul, he's sooo sexy! I hope you keep updating!
*goes off to read the rest of ChaosChild's fics*

~L
person Acal
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great! lol
person tata12772
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im really enjoying this glimpse into this couples everyday lives...keep up the great work and cant wait to read the next installment
person sammy
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahah.. that was really cute!
person sammy
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes it was worth the wait!!! you should have a chapter where Lindsay actually left him.. hehe
person Fan
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job on the story. I love reading Envy. Please continue to update :)
person Acal
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! That was great!