rate_review Reviews

I absolutely love this couple, and I love just the little glimpses into their lives instead of just a story of how they met and got together...I really hope that we get to read about their first time together:D keep up the great work.

Oh, what a sweet, yet a bit melancholy, chapter. A little short, but it fits. Was hoping for a little smut....but I can wait!! Thanks for the shout out thingy, hehe. It was weird seeing my name up there. :P
Until next time.

~L

love it! =)

AWWWW!!!

Aww...how sweet.
Awesome chapter.

~L

Awesome as always! Can't wait for the next one!

I don't know what it is about this story, but I am in love with it. I have re-read every chapter about five times. And I'm not exaggerating. I'm a sap so those chapters where Paul is mushy were my favorites :D. And the last few paragraphs in the last chapter were incredible. When Lindsey said "Yours," I couldn't believe that that was the my favorite part of the chapter. Just that one word. So before I start gushing :D, I'll stop here. But amazing story!

I really love how you tell the story of Lindsey n Paul w.o having to write a series, just little one shot footage of their day to day life. Maybe you should write about them going out on date, we so rarely see them stray the apartment. Thanks!

omg i love your story! Keep up the great work!!!

Hey! Me again. I just thought I would tell you that I've been thinking a lot about your story since I finished reading it the other day (yesterday? *shrug*) Anyway, I've been trying to think up different mini-plots I'd like to see in your series of one shots. I've come up with about 12 different ones. I don't know if you have a whole stock pile of ideas or if your running out of ideas, but I'd thought I share some of my ideas with you.

(in order of what I'd like to see most):
- Lindsey and Paul's first time
- When Lindsey finds out about when Paul was with that other girl when they broke up
- Their first date
- Lindsey gets high:
- Lindsey gets high because she's under a lot of stress, or...
- Lindsey gets high because Paul left a batch of "special brownies" in the kitchen
- Paul following through on what he wanted from their football bet
- When Paul and Lindsey first move in together
- They go on vacation together (maybe the beach where Paul can't get super possesive over Lindsey in a bikini)
- Sex in public
- Spring cleaning or just normal chores
- One or the other waking the other with a "special surpirse" *wink wink*
- They are doing their taxes and one of them gets frustrated and they start "doing their taxes" *wink*

Anyway, just ignore these if you don't need them. These are just some of the things I personally would like to see. E-mail me if you would like to at: hannah_abbott_hp@yahoo.com

Tata!

~L