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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're back from hiding! And as soon as I came on this site, I found TWO brand spankin' new chapter waiting for me. I've missed Paul and Lindsey so much. I know that Paul isn't the romantic mushy gushy type, but can you write a chapter that has a little bit fluff? please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter :D
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG URRR BACKKKKKKKKKKK..... LOVEDDDDDDD ITTTTTTTTTTTTT
ABSOLUTLEY LOVEED IT
i hope u will be update SOON
n cld u please do a chapter where paul is drunk and hence VERY sexily dominating =)
loveee uuuuuuuuuu !!!!!!!!!!
ABSOLUTLEY LOVEED IT
i hope u will be update SOON
n cld u please do a chapter where paul is drunk and hence VERY sexily dominating =)
loveee uuuuuuuuuu !!!!!!!!!!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHERE ARE YOU :(
WEN R U GONNA UPDATE
CUM BACK PLEASE
WEN R U GONNA UPDATE
CUM BACK PLEASE
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thats definitely the best chapter from Envy. I love possessive jealous guys - they lack potential to go astray, or at least most of the time.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey i had an idea: maybe you could do a chapter where paul is drunk
please please please id really like to see that =)
**hopes you will do that***
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
please please please id really like to see that =)
**hopes you will do that***
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing, love your work!
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Nice chapter. When I listed 'Sex in public' as something I wanted to see, this is not what I had in mind. :P I was thinking something a little more private, like: a park, hiking trail, in a car, behind a building, etc. Somewhere that they COULD get caught (and that's was makes it soo thrilling!) but there is a low chance of that happening.
This was totally different. But in a good way! This chapter was one part sex in public and one part exhibition. Not really my thing, but it was HOT!
Keep up the good work!
~L
ps - One question, is there a set amount of chapters that you're aiming for, or are you just going to keep writing until you run out of ideas?
This was totally different. But in a good way! This chapter was one part sex in public and one part exhibition. Not really my thing, but it was HOT!
Keep up the good work!
~L
ps - One question, is there a set amount of chapters that you're aiming for, or are you just going to keep writing until you run out of ideas?
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
one of my favorite stories!
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Review Chapters 1 - 22.
I caught on to this story around chapter 12, so I had a lot of catch up. I really like this story and you've have done a great job with the writing (always great sex scenes) and with the characters. I really like the flash back chapters - nice to see how they started. I wonder when are we going to see her friend "Ralph" - the guy that they had their first fight over. Or at least to us it was their first fight (in chapter 2).
Anyway, figured I should review since I get the pleasure of reading it. Please keep writing, cause I love to keep reading.
Looking forward to your next update.
I caught on to this story around chapter 12, so I had a lot of catch up. I really like this story and you've have done a great job with the writing (always great sex scenes) and with the characters. I really like the flash back chapters - nice to see how they started. I wonder when are we going to see her friend "Ralph" - the guy that they had their first fight over. Or at least to us it was their first fight (in chapter 2).
Anyway, figured I should review since I get the pleasure of reading it. Please keep writing, cause I love to keep reading.
Looking forward to your next update.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Smut! I love it. This chapter was tastfully and realisticlly done. No prostates this time :P JK!
At first I thought "Well, that was a little random, her just giving in all the sudden." But then I realized, that's how it happened for me. My boyfriend of 2 years (at the time, now it's 3.5 years) kept bringing it up and bringing up and one day I just said 'Okay, fine.' lol Maybe that's how it happens for a lot of women.
Anyway, great chapter! Looking forward to the next!
~L
At first I thought "Well, that was a little random, her just giving in all the sudden." But then I realized, that's how it happened for me. My boyfriend of 2 years (at the time, now it's 3.5 years) kept bringing it up and bringing up and one day I just said 'Okay, fine.' lol Maybe that's how it happens for a lot of women.
Anyway, great chapter! Looking forward to the next!
~L