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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the long awaited first time. Something was a little off though, I think, with the characters. Like Paul didn't feel like Paul. But I can't complain about the emotions you put into the chapter though because they were there. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
those last 2 chapters were amazing, cant wait for more!
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWW that was beautiful... so sweeet
u alwayz leave me wanting more... pleasee update soon
a lil suggestion =)... could u please do a chapter where paul is drunk and very dominating (in a sexy way tho =))
LOL hope to see a chapter SOOON
u alwayz leave me wanting more... pleasee update soon
a lil suggestion =)... could u please do a chapter where paul is drunk and very dominating (in a sexy way tho =))
LOL hope to see a chapter SOOON
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last two lines of Alone Time were awesome. Along with the rest of the chapter, of course. I love this story so much!
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
The little snippets of their lives is very creative, and sexy!
Of course.... you must know which flashback I hope you write next..... Losing her virginity!!!
I do want to compliment you on your character development as well, I feel like these people are real
and I get to know them through the stories, which makes the whole effect even hotter!
Keep on writing, I love the flashbacks, but anything you write will be great, I'm sure!
Thank You!
Writer11377
The little snippets of their lives is very creative, and sexy!
Of course.... you must know which flashback I hope you write next..... Losing her virginity!!!
I do want to compliment you on your character development as well, I feel like these people are real
and I get to know them through the stories, which makes the whole effect even hotter!
Keep on writing, I love the flashbacks, but anything you write will be great, I'm sure!
Thank You!
Writer11377
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Your back!!! I’m glad. Keep it coming…
Update soon pleas
Your back!!! I’m glad. Keep it coming…
Update soon pleas
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh that was really sweet, great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was hot, great job! =)
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow the chap was amazing cant wait for the next one
ps
please try not to disappear again i missed you stories
ps
please try not to disappear again i missed you stories
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG i fuckin LOVED IT
that was too damn good... u leave me wanting more... GOD I LOVE LINDSEY AND PAULL =)
PLEASEEEEEEEEE MOREEEEEEEE
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
that was too damn good... u leave me wanting more... GOD I LOVE LINDSEY AND PAULL =)
PLEASEEEEEEEEE MOREEEEEEEE
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE